Sea Lion's March 1/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 21:48:31 UTC
I hope this isn't too far off from your request. Warnings: AU, WW2 setting, dark, lots of violence, torture, sexual threats, use of racial slurs.Just following orders
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Sea Lion's March 2/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 22:00:10 UTC
A small anteroom led to the main interrogation room. He snatched the whip from its bracket in the wall, so hard the lash snapped at his fingers. He could hear voices in the other room. Jeers and laughter. Laughter, of all things! Germany burst through the door
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Sea Lion's March 4/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 22:05:20 UTC
"Yes," Germany said, hoarsely.
"You... Idiot. You fucking idiot! How could you let this happen? Have you seen-? You idiot!"
"I couldn't stop it, England. I-"
"Idiot! You couldn't stop it because you're a cowardly, feckless fuck! You must have seen the warning sounds! In all your years, you must have experienced this before! You're too old to be led around by the nose like a teenaged soldier, damn it! You should have, should have done something"I can't control what the populace do. How long did it take you to abolish slavery? How long will it be before you right all of the wrongs left in your own country? We can't simply prevent these things with a sweep of our hands
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Sea Lion's March 5/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 22:07:38 UTC
Germany could feel the soldiers' eyes on him. He could hear them holding their breath in anticipation. The leather of the whip's handle felt tacky in his sweaty palm. He drew back and raised it. He brought it down across England's back hard enough to break the skin. England grunted as a ragged red line appeared. Germany brought the whip down again. The beaded blood splattered across his back. England made only the smallest of sounds in response. Two thick, crisscrossed welts led from the nape of his neck to the base of his spine. Germany brought it down again, harder, so it deepened the existing cuts where it touched them and opened another
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Sea Lion's March 6/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 22:10:13 UTC
Germany swiped at his face and pushed England away. England swore under his breath as the loose tendrils of skin that had tethered Germany broke away. Germany stooped and retrieved the whip from the floor. He lashed it toward a small group of the more boisterous soldiers but snapped it back before it hit. That shut them up. He snapped it randomly at them as he walked around England. He stood in front of him
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Re: Sea Lion's March 6/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 22:11:31 UTC
Germany peeled England from him and kicked him in the stomach. He retched and flipped onto his side. The soldiers knotted around them, using the couple of feet Germany had left between them. Their voices were no longer distinguishable. Everyone else drowned out everyone else so it all became one jackal's jeer. A flurry of boots thudded on England's sides
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Re: Sea Lion's March 6/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 23:00:30 UTC
Not OP. I really enjoyed reading this and you did an excellent job writing it. I'm still shocked at how good it was. I especially loved the way you ended it like you did.
Re: Sea Lion's March 6/?
anonymous
March 27 2010, 23:57:47 UTC
...and same anon as above would like to add, I wish I could make a longer more coherent comment because this fic deserves it, but ajsdlsjkdhl I have no words. Still picking up jaw from floor. But anyway, this was amazing; I think I cringed irl while reading.
awesome fill!
anonymous
March 28 2010, 04:17:28 UTC
"Your nation wants to suck my cock like a cheap rent boy," England said, in perfect German. "Stop staring at it and do it."
...Am I the only one who wanted Germany to do it?? This Germany wants to lose the war. And it would be a good message to send to the ogling soldier boys: no matter how long you have been doing something, no matter your original reasons, if you decide it is wrong, STOP. Plus, it would get England to shut up for maybe thirty seconds and that is always a good thing. /shot
Hahaha anyway thank you Authornon for a wonderful story!
Re: Sea Lion's March 6/?
anonymous
March 28 2010, 05:18:35 UTC
"Your nation wants to suck my cock like a cheap rent boy," England said, in perfect German. "Stop staring at it and do it."
Which, in perfect German, would be: "Eure Nation will meinen Schwanz lutschen wie der biliige Stricher, der sie ist." & "Hör auf ihn anzustarren und mach's endlich."
Just sayin' if you, like, decide to de-anon at one point and publish your fic. Which you should so I can save it to my memories. Unf unf England, why are you such a bastard?
Author!anon is touched
anonymous
March 28 2010, 11:27:25 UTC
Omg thank you anons, just...thank you. Waking up to all these wonderful comments has really brightened up my day.
Also, thanks so much for that translation German-speaking anon. I'll probably add it to the notes at the end of the fic if I deanon later.
And anon who apologised for not writing a more detailed comment, don't be silly! Every comment is something to be grateful for, whether it's a paragraph or three words long.
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A small anteroom led to the main interrogation room. He snatched the whip from its bracket in the wall, so hard the lash snapped at his fingers. He could hear voices in the other room. Jeers and laughter. Laughter, of all things! Germany burst through the door ( ... )
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"Yes," Germany said, hoarsely.
"You... Idiot. You fucking idiot! How could you let this happen? Have you seen-? You idiot!"
"I couldn't stop it, England. I-"
"Idiot! You couldn't stop it because you're a cowardly, feckless fuck! You must have seen the warning sounds! In all your years, you must have experienced this before! You're too old to be led around by the nose like a teenaged soldier, damn it! You should have, should have done something"I can't control what the populace do. How long did it take you to abolish slavery? How long will it be before you right all of the wrongs left in your own country? We can't simply prevent these things with a sweep of our hands ( ... )
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Holy crap England, you're freakishly badass.
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...Am I the only one who wanted Germany to do it?? This Germany wants to lose the war. And it would be a good message to send to the ogling soldier boys: no matter how long you have been doing something, no matter your original reasons, if you decide it is wrong, STOP. Plus, it would get England to shut up for maybe thirty seconds and that is always a good thing. /shot
Hahaha anyway thank you Authornon for a wonderful story!
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Which, in perfect German, would be: "Eure Nation will meinen Schwanz lutschen wie der biliige Stricher, der sie ist." & "Hör auf ihn anzustarren und mach's endlich."
Just sayin' if you, like, decide to de-anon at one point and publish your fic. Which you should so I can save it to my memories. Unf unf England, why are you such a bastard?
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ENGLAND, WHY SO FUCKING AWESOME AND BADASS.
akjdfhsfal keyboard smash.
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Also, thanks so much for that translation German-speaking anon. I'll probably add it to the notes at the end of the fic if I deanon later.
And anon who apologised for not writing a more detailed comment, don't be silly! Every comment is something to be grateful for, whether it's a paragraph or three words long.
♥s to you all!
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