Counterproductive
anonymous
March 12 2010, 23:59:10 UTC
First time filler!anon to the rescue, hoping that she isn’t making too many mistakes, and apologizing for eventual (read; probably unavoidable) OOC-ness resulting from the fact that most of her knowledge of the characters is from fandom. Author!anon isn’t really sure where this is going yet, and has no less than three exams coming up next week but promises that this will indeed go somewhere. Eventually. Having to study will probably make me write more, not less, anyway.For once, Germany was relieved that Italy had a habit of oversleeping
( ... )
OP wants your hand in marriage
anonymous
March 13 2010, 09:50:12 UTC
I'M DEAD SERIOUS.
I'm loving this fill so far! Everything about it is just so... well, so them. Italy's uselessness. Germany's organizational skills. And those references... I swear, author!anon, I love this so much, I want to give you my firstborn. MY. FIRSTBORN.
"Still, he supposed it could be worse. At least he was wearing pants."
I think I died and went to heaven right there.
let's get marriedmarriedmarried
Captcha says: expenditures romantic. Why yes, I think that Germany has a folder for that, too...
Author!anon says ’I do!’
anonymous
March 13 2010, 16:50:47 UTC
Author!anon dies and joins you in heaven from the wonderful comment on her first ever fanfiction! Never mind firstborns, OP can have my SOUL.
-Runs to nearest church- There’s a nice 12th century one a five minute walk from my house, actually!
I think Captcha is right! Something tells me that folder hasn’t been updated for a while, though... or ever. And if it has, it's probably a state secret! Captcha seems to think it will be soon, though; 'new sensuous' indeed!
Re: Counterproductive
anonymous
March 13 2010, 17:05:30 UTC
Author!anon is relieved, and happy you like! Not yet, but there will be! I just need to get my ideas in order.
And on that note, I think Captcha might be psychic; I've been planning a guest appearance by Austria! Although, 'when stiletto'? No, Captcha, cross-dressing Austria is not on the agenda!
Counterproductive part 2/?
anonymous
March 14 2010, 16:34:30 UTC
When I submitted this for the fills index reCaptcha told me ‘find horridly’… Surely it’s not that bad Captcha? Meanie… Still not sure where this is going, but it's going somewhere, that it is! “There’s lot’s of big numbers on this one… but this one is about energy made from garbage? Huh, maybe I should tell Brother about that one. And why are all his letter in there
( ... )
Counterproductive part 2.5/?
anonymous
March 14 2010, 16:41:26 UTC
Once again marvelling at his own self-control, Germany stoically resisted the urge to tell the man, in no uncertain terms, exactly whose fault that was. A mental image of Italy’s crying face if he did so provided more than enough incentive. Really, what was wrong with him
( ... )
OP is having a crappy weekend so far, but this... This just made up for everything. I'm not kidding. I'm falling in love with your Italy, your Germany, your everybody. Believe me, you don't have to worry about them being OOC; they are so in character that I can completely see Himaruya making a comic version of this.
"Wow, Brother really doesn't like you, Germany! What did you do, steal his girlfriend?"
Oh, Italy. XD I think I died again.
Captcha sez: considered emending. Wha- Captcha, this is awesome as it is! WHY DOES IT NEED CORRECTING!?
Author!anon is glad to be of service and hopes things will get better for you! Aw, Author!anon is falling in love with OP. Amazing praise is amazing; makes me want to do an art!fill, too! (Bad brain, math exam first; slash later, math first; slash later. Oh, who am I kidding, math is boooring.)
I loved writing that. Their double obliviousness is amazingly fun to write!
Captcha is mean. Author!anon would much rather listen to OP!
Counterproductive part 3/?
anonymous
March 24 2010, 23:46:22 UTC
Finally an update to assure OP that I am still working on this! Exams chased away all my plot bunnies T_T I think I managed to capture most of them again, one of those being the ending. Bleh. Writer’s block is evil… Author!anon apologizes for the wait!
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“What? NO! I mean, it’s fine, really, there’s no need for you to- You just go eat some pasta and-“
The exalted Italian just kept smiling. With his new goal firmly in mind Feliciano set about gathering stacks of paper in each hand.
“Germany always helps me out so now it’s my turn to help Germany!” he declared proudly.
“I insist that you let me do this myself. It’s not as though it is-“ Taking a deep breath, he steeled himself. “It is not your fault that I have all this paperwork to do.”
“But I want to! That’s what friends do, isn’t it” Stilling and seemingly reflecting on his words (one never really knew with Italy) his face fell slightly. Cocking his head and letting his hands fall to his sides on the desk he still sat on, he gazed imploringly at Ludwig. “We are friends,
( ... )
OP once again
anonymous
March 25 2010, 08:05:43 UTC
I am NOT exaggerating at all when I say that this is the most in-character I have ever seen Germany and Italy anywhere other than the official Hetalia comics and anime.
Not. At. All.
I love how Germany is thinking of Feliciano's attempts to "help" him as an invasion (the references to France and Prussia killed me) and, more importantly, I also love how Germany isn't secretly all lovey-dovey like in some other fics I've read. That's the way I like him best. before the official GerIta, that is
And don't worry, I'm not going to be breathing down your throat going "ZOMG I WANT TEH NEXT CHAPPIE NAO!1!!" believe me, I know what writer's block is like... *is currently suffering* I'm just so happy that someone took the time to fill this, and honestly, this fill is absolutely phenomenal. Thank you so much!
(Oh mai, a violent outburst from Germany? This is just a suggestion to get your AMAZING author-anon gears going, but maybe you could have Germany think that *insert nation here... maybe France...* is trying to barge in on him, and he
( ... )
Re: OP once again
anonymous
April 9 2010, 12:27:35 UTC
Thank you so much!
Yeah, I don’t really buy lovey-dovey Germany, either. I don’t think he’s completely incompetent in the romance department, either, I just think that the thought never really crosses his mind which makes him seem, well, absolutely clueless XD
Good to know! Mostly I was worried you’d have given up on waiting and forgotten, or something; I do that a lot, checking on a fanfic or something every day for a week and then just forget about it (especially since I’ve forgotten to put the updates in the fills index >.<) Glad to have made you happy; now if I could only get to the actual kink, no?
(I think that can really work! I my head, this was all so much shorter and simpler, I kind of veered of course halfway through XP Well, on towards annoying Germany even more and hoping that can set things right!)
Fiendish Indro, huh? Sounds interesting! Captcha says 'here unwrap' Someone's tied up? Not sure I want to know...
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I'm loving this fill so far! Everything about it is just so... well, so them. Italy's uselessness. Germany's organizational skills. And those references... I swear, author!anon, I love this so much, I want to give you my firstborn. MY. FIRSTBORN.
"Still, he supposed it could be worse. At least he was wearing pants."
I think I died and went to heaven right there.
let's get marriedmarriedmarried
Captcha says: expenditures romantic. Why yes, I think that Germany has a folder for that, too...
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-Runs to nearest church- There’s a nice 12th century one a five minute walk from my house, actually!
I think Captcha is right! Something tells me that folder hasn’t been updated for a while, though... or ever. And if it has, it's probably a state secret! Captcha seems to think it will be soon, though; 'new sensuous' indeed!
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Captcha: estimated sigmund. No, no, Freud was Austrian, Captcha...
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And on that note, I think Captcha might be psychic; I've been planning a guest appearance by Austria! Although, 'when stiletto'? No, Captcha, cross-dressing Austria is not on the agenda!
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*faints from happiness*
OP is having a crappy weekend so far, but this... This just made up for everything. I'm not kidding. I'm falling in love with your Italy, your Germany, your everybody. Believe me, you don't have to worry about them being OOC; they are so in character that I can completely see Himaruya making a comic version of this.
"Wow, Brother really doesn't like you, Germany! What did you do, steal his girlfriend?"
Oh, Italy. XD I think I died again.
Captcha sez: considered emending. Wha- Captcha, this is awesome as it is! WHY DOES IT NEED CORRECTING!?
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I loved writing that. Their double obliviousness is amazingly fun to write!
Captcha is mean. Author!anon would much rather listen to OP!
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So cute! ^3^
Can't wait to see what happens next~
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“What? NO! I mean, it’s fine, really, there’s no need for you to- You just go eat some pasta and-“
The exalted Italian just kept smiling. With his new goal firmly in mind Feliciano set about gathering stacks of paper in each hand.
“Germany always helps me out so now it’s my turn to help Germany!” he declared proudly.
“I insist that you let me do this myself. It’s not as though it is-“ Taking a deep breath, he steeled himself. “It is not your fault that I have all this paperwork to do.”
“But I want to! That’s what friends do, isn’t it” Stilling and seemingly reflecting on his words (one never really knew with Italy) his face fell slightly. Cocking his head and letting his hands fall to his sides on the desk he still sat on, he gazed imploringly at Ludwig. “We are friends, ( ... )
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Not. At. All.
I love how Germany is thinking of Feliciano's attempts to "help" him as an invasion (the references to France and Prussia killed me) and, more importantly, I also love how Germany isn't secretly all lovey-dovey like in some other fics I've read. That's the way I like him best. before the official GerIta, that is
And don't worry, I'm not going to be breathing down your throat going "ZOMG I WANT TEH NEXT CHAPPIE NAO!1!!" believe me, I know what writer's block is like... *is currently suffering* I'm just so happy that someone took the time to fill this, and honestly, this fill is absolutely phenomenal. Thank you so much!
(Oh mai, a violent outburst from Germany? This is just a suggestion to get your AMAZING author-anon gears going, but maybe you could have Germany think that *insert nation here... maybe France...* is trying to barge in on him, and he ( ... )
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Yeah, I don’t really buy lovey-dovey Germany, either. I don’t think he’s completely incompetent in the romance department, either, I just think that the thought never really crosses his mind which makes him seem, well, absolutely clueless XD
Good to know! Mostly I was worried you’d have given up on waiting and forgotten, or something; I do that a lot, checking on a fanfic or something every day for a week and then just forget about it (especially since I’ve forgotten to put the updates in the fills index >.<)
Glad to have made you happy; now if I could only get to the actual kink, no?
(I think that can really work! I my head, this was all so much shorter and simpler, I kind of veered of course halfway through XP Well, on towards annoying Germany even more and hoping that can set things right!)
Fiendish Indro, huh? Sounds interesting! Captcha says 'here unwrap' Someone's tied up? Not sure I want to know...
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