And a date was made and all of Europe rejoiced [1/2]
anonymous
March 8 2010, 02:43:04 UTC
"My Lord, the Spanish envoy has arrived and awaits your presence. Her Royal Highness has ordered the hall to be cleared and you are expected at once
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Re: And a date was made and all of Europe rejoiced [2/2]
anonymous
March 8 2010, 02:48:02 UTC
eep, did not mean to submit the first part twice.She smiled, as if anticipating all that was said. "Your queen is thirty-seven and should she remain unwed any longer, the throne will. . ." she didn't bother to finish her final words, but she knew the answer, as did Arthur. As they spoke, pale Elizabeth was in her cold, damp room with her matted red hair and that Queen of Scots was out there, scheming, and the sudden emotion that welled up inside him was so abrupt, it was as if he had been struck. The Spanish envoy had had it all very well planned out, and the favor of the cards were against him. He crossed his arms with a degree of solemnity
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Re: And a date was made and all of Europe rejoiced [2/2]
anonymous
January 25 2013, 21:37:26 UTC
Good but I was a bit bothered by the respect Spain showed England (calling him "Lord") when he never once adressed her as "my Lady" since they were both of equal power and if anything Spain was stronger at the time. I would've greatly liked a bit more respect from England towards Spain. :/
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This is wonderful, I love the dynaimcs between the two they play off each other quite nicely. Well done Author!anon
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