Russia and his partner (either America or France) are in a relationship, and they decide to have sex for the first time. Russia really doesn't want to, not because his lover is unsatisfactory or he doesn't love him, but every other time he's had sex, it was BRUTAL RAPE. So, he agrees anyway to make his partner happy, but as soon as they start he gets scared and runs away to lock himself in the bathroom and throw up. Cue negotiations through the door, comforting, and cuddling. (There can be EXTREMELY MILD comfort sex if that's how anon rolls. (It may be noteworthy that, in my headcanon, Russia never, ever raped the Baltics or any of his other republics.)
In Baby Steps [1/?]
anonymous
March 4 2010, 04:59:58 UTC
The beds in this hotel are amazing - so much so, in fact, that Ivan doesn’t even realize he fell asleep until his eyelids twitch, opening to a dark room and a flickering television set. His fingers are laced over his belly and covered by two other hands; one callused and rough, the other smooth with lavender-scented oil.
“Francis?” he murmurs, voice thick with slumber as he lifts his head. “Alfred?”
“Ivan!” Alfred’s voice is a bit loud in Ivan’s ear, but he’s still waking up, still feeling the pleasant fuzz of his doze filling his head, so he turns and indulges Alfred with an enthusiastic, if sloppy, kiss.
“Good evening, cheri.” Francis’s voice is low and sultry in his right ear. Ivan doesn’t resist as elegant fingers turn his head, as skilled lips and tongue smear a kiss over his own mouth. “Did you have a nice nap?” Francis asks, his voice a sweet, low croon as he presses Ivan back onto the pillows, running fingers through white-blond hair
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Re: In Baby Steps [1/?]
anonymous
March 4 2010, 05:20:29 UTC
This is both my OTPs and once, three of my kinks, and my preferred characterization of Russia in terms of sexuality. I think my head just may explode, and you haven't even started the porn. Eagerly awaiting the next part <3
Re: In Baby Steps [1/?]
anonymous
March 4 2010, 11:37:26 UTC
Oh, this is lovely and rare: both well-written and well-characterized! I don't even like the character in canon, but I'm always happy to see a Russia who's not a damn rapetruck! Or at least has some real motives for whatever the heck he does, sheesh, people! XD;
I love your characterization here, already, and like Russia's realization that France is the mitigating influence on America. Because, really, the kid's like a 90 kg gold retriever; someone's got to restrain his enthusiasm occasionally, or someone's going to get hurt.
Mm, I love this sentence -- and every word that comes after it, really -- but especially this sentence: Ivan doesn’t stop smiling, but something fragile in him trembles. Right there, you can already tell he's going to push himself too far and without either man realizing it quite fast enough.
I'd feel a tiny bit sadistic for enjoying the idea of this prompt so much, but it already looks like you're going to play it out just right. Because even ignoring all the other good signs, I can read titles! :D
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OOH! OOH! IT'S HERE! (I'm so sorry that I didn't reply earlier, I just got home) This is brilliant, anon. It's everything I ever wanted and more. I think you pretty much nailed the characterization (as other anons have said before, it's good to see a non rapetruck!Russia), and I love your Ivan so much. He's such a sweetie. Thank you so much for working on this prompt. I'll be waiting desperately for the next part!
In Baby Steps [2/?]
anonymous
March 4 2010, 21:41:01 UTC
Holy shit, anons, I’m floored by the response to this. Thank you so much for all your kind comments!“I…” he starts, but stops. Was that a tremor in his voice? Yes. He thinks so. He clears his throat to try again. “You - I want to - I want to be with you both
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OH HELL YES PART TWO Yay! I'm still loving it! Poor Ivan... I really felt for him. As with the characterization, the emotion and descriptions were lovely. Thank you again for such a nice fill! I shall wait with bated breath.
Re: In Baby Steps [2/?]
anonymous
March 4 2010, 22:07:23 UTC
Oh, wow, and that's why communication is important, boys and girls. Especially BEFORE the heat of the moment. Because physical reactions are hard enough to interpret WITH enough information, but when all the blood is headed away from your brain? Even harder, yeah. >_>;
And god, yes, your characterization! ♥
LOL, ReCaptcha says "Mounted videoing" -- wtf? Is Belarus outside the window with a knife AND a video camera? ON A FUCKING PONY? With Poland?
Re: In Baby Steps [2/?]
anonymous
March 4 2010, 22:09:54 UTC
Oh anon that was just heart breaking. Poor Ivan, some of those lines just made me so sad. I hope France and America are successful at doing what they do best!
Re: In Baby Steps [2/?]
anonymous
March 5 2010, 08:53:23 UTC
Auurrgh, you horny idiots, THAT IS NOT THE DEFINITION OF 'GOING SLOW' WITH ANYONE, LEAST OF ALL A RAPE VICTIM ;_; Poor Russia... I sorta wish I could fast-forward to a happy ending but then I'd miss all this delicious, sweet, well characterized, well written, beautiful fic.
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“Francis?” he murmurs, voice thick with slumber as he lifts his head. “Alfred?”
“Ivan!” Alfred’s voice is a bit loud in Ivan’s ear, but he’s still waking up, still feeling the pleasant fuzz of his doze filling his head, so he turns and indulges Alfred with an enthusiastic, if sloppy, kiss.
“Good evening, cheri.” Francis’s voice is low and sultry in his right ear. Ivan doesn’t resist as elegant fingers turn his head, as skilled lips and tongue smear a kiss over his own mouth. “Did you have a nice nap?” Francis asks, his voice a sweet, low croon as he presses Ivan back onto the pillows, running fingers through white-blond hair ( ... )
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Anon please you have to continue, I've melted into a puddle, with only enough strength to press the f5 key over and over.
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all right i'm done now
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I think my head just may explode, and you haven't even started the porn.
Eagerly awaiting the next part <3
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Gorgeous so gorgeous....this is going to be amazing I can tell already!
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I love your characterization here, already, and like Russia's realization that France is the mitigating influence on America. Because, really, the kid's like a 90 kg gold retriever; someone's got to restrain his enthusiasm occasionally, or someone's going to get hurt.
Mm, I love this sentence -- and every word that comes after it, really -- but especially this sentence: Ivan doesn’t stop smiling, but something fragile in him trembles. Right there, you can already tell he's going to push himself too far and without either man realizing it quite fast enough.
I'd feel a tiny bit sadistic for enjoying the idea of this prompt so much, but it already looks like you're going to play it out just right. Because even ignoring all the other good signs, I can read titles! :D ( ... )
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So... cute. I feel all warm inside b-but still, poor Ivan. D:
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Yay! I'm still loving it! Poor Ivan... I really felt for him. As with the characterization, the emotion and descriptions were lovely. Thank you again for such a nice fill! I shall wait with bated breath.
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And god, yes, your characterization! ♥
LOL, ReCaptcha says "Mounted videoing" -- wtf? Is Belarus outside the window with a knife AND a video camera? ON A FUCKING PONY? With Poland?
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I'm excited for the potential fluff! <3
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Captcha, 'gagarin member'? ...whut?
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