Re: Untitled [1/??]
anonymous
February 15 2010, 02:06:29 UTC
Oh noes! Please don't let Poland disappear, anon! Um, he's just hiding, that's it... *mumbles to herself* Poland's too stubborn to die!
Nice start, though. I like how you have it separated into three mini-sections. And I also find it hilarious that even if America is isolationist, he doesn't consider Canada part of the outside. ~__^
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anonymous
February 15 2010, 05:24:51 UTC
Pshhh he's ALMOST gone. Only Liet can see him and that'll be the next part, which I'm gonna do like, after I submit this post. Totally. /Poland
Thank you. And, to be honest, it was only three parts because I was barely thinking at the time and I just wanted to get it out and then pass out. BD
Oh he does. He doesn't wanna seem rude though since Mattie's family and in my headcanon, he's more or less considerate towards family and therefore doesn't wanna seem oh so rude. 8D
Re: Untitled [2/ETERNITY or until someone else picks up on this]
anonymous
February 15 2010, 23:04:24 UTC
Good job anon. I can't believe nobody's commented on this part yet. It's cool how you're not focusing on just a few characters, but mentioning a whole bunch. There's even OC's!
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anonymous
February 17 2010, 08:54:58 UTC
Uh. Yeah. This one, I think, is longer than the other, so only one snapshot this time. .A. Sorry for the delay for this btw. I dunno what caused it to be honest. 8D; I have another fill that I'm working on and I got really lost on that one and I wanna keep the parts on the same number for the most part so my attention'll be divided evenly. Plus my original draft got wiped out so. :c OH and this part'll show a pre-established relationship between two of the African countries bordering the Med. Sea. there isn't ANY historical basis off of this; I just wanted some couple-like angst and a little bit of OC fluff. Enjoy! :DMorocco was standing in front of the coastal beach, a somber look on
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anonymous
February 17 2010, 16:44:02 UTC
Why do I have the feeling that OP isn't paying attention after a week? oTL"Please," she begged. "Let us meet at your house once a month. That's all we're asking
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I'm sorry that I didn't comment until now, I've had exams and somehow this fill completely slipped through my looking at the fill index (I really should have just bookmarked the request and checked that -.-)
Aaaaanyway comment.
This is exactly the way that I imagined it, the snippets, I mean <3 And I totally like the Marocco OC, I don't have much of a clue about African nations so I can't relly comment on how good she is but I really like her?
And I love what you're doing with Canada. Him being more known than his brother? Oh God DEAR ALfred what have you done.
Also the idea to have Poland nearly gone this way is GREAT. I wouldn't have been able to come up with it but it makes perfect sense~
[I won't comment on if it is the way that I imagined it, because I tried to not have too many ideas of my own to be surprised by what people would come up with. unf. Don't hit me for that.]
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anonymous
February 17 2010, 23:01:57 UTC
That's it. I'm officially psychic. >D
lol It's fine, don't worry. And the bookmarking the request, I do that ALL the time cause I'm just a paranoid bitch like that. |D
Should I be afraid of that question mark OP? ouo
Well, Canada > America because America is staying low under the radar, and when you aren't noticed, you're kinda forgotten. You know what I mean?
Thank you! ^^ To be honest, the first idea I had in my brain was him like, translucent almost, but that seemed weird so I went with this instead. I think I did a much better job doing this. :D
(lawllll No problem, just tell me if you wanna see anything changed or if I'm not doing something right, all right? I don't mind people chewing my work; tells me what I should change so they WON'T next time. :DDD )
Most of my requests get never filled so I stopped bookmarking them at one point ><
btw I can spell The question mark is of the I'm-sorry-*shrug* variety? Sorry to have worried you. I just don't know much more about Marocco than Marocco crisis and what the ads say. So I really have no idea how her characterization would be
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Captcha: snubbery. Right on, Capthca.
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I felt a little discouraged actually by this first comment, but now I feel a lot better. :DD
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Nice start, though. I like how you have it separated into three mini-sections. And I also find it hilarious that even if America is isolationist, he doesn't consider Canada part of the outside. ~__^
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Thank you. And, to be honest, it was only three parts because I was barely thinking at the time and I just wanted to get it out and then pass out. BD
Oh he does. He doesn't wanna seem rude though since Mattie's family and in my headcanon, he's more or less considerate towards family and therefore doesn't wanna seem oh so rude. 8D
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Also I can't do Sweden-speak so I tried the best I could."Hey, Su-san ( ... )
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Sorry for the delay for this btw. I dunno what caused it to be honest. 8D; I have another fill that I'm working on and I got really lost on that one and I wanna keep the parts on the same number for the most part so my attention'll be divided evenly. Plus my original draft got wiped out so. :c
OH and this part'll show a pre-established relationship between two of the African countries bordering the Med. Sea. there isn't ANY historical basis off of this; I just wanted some couple-like angst and a little bit of OC fluff.
Enjoy! :DMorocco was standing in front of the coastal beach, a somber look on ( ... )
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someTHING warm streaming down his cheeks.
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Aaaaanyway comment.
This is exactly the way that I imagined it, the snippets, I mean <3 And I totally like the Marocco OC, I don't have much of a clue about African nations so I can't relly comment on how good she is but I really like her?
And I love what you're doing with Canada. Him being more known than his brother? Oh God DEAR ALfred what have you done.
Also the idea to have Poland nearly gone this way is GREAT. I wouldn't have been able to come up with it but it makes perfect sense~
[I won't comment on if it is the way that I imagined it, because I tried to not have too many ideas of my own to be surprised by what people would come up with. unf. Don't hit me for that.]
Also don't let the trolls scare you.
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lol It's fine, don't worry. And the bookmarking the request, I do that ALL the time cause I'm just a paranoid bitch like that. |D
Should I be afraid of that question mark OP? ouo
Well, Canada > America because America is staying low under the radar, and when you aren't noticed, you're kinda forgotten. You know what I mean?
Thank you! ^^ To be honest, the first idea I had in my brain was him like, translucent almost, but that seemed weird so I went with this instead. I think I did a much better job doing this. :D
(lawllll No problem, just tell me if you wanna see anything changed or if I'm not doing something right, all right? I don't mind people chewing my work; tells me what I should change so they WON'T next time. :DDD )
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btw I can spell The question mark is of the I'm-sorry-*shrug* variety? Sorry to have worried you. I just don't know much more about Marocco than Marocco crisis and what the ads say. So I really have no idea how her characterization would be ( ... )
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