Sveiki, from Liet
anonymous
February 10 2010, 00:01:01 UTC
Sveiki, fandom!
I don’t have too much time to write to you - the polędwiczki wołowe I’m making for dinner is roasting, and Poland should be here any minute - but I had a few things I wanted to address and I suppose it’s with him that I’ll start.
Poland. Not the beef sirloin.
I love Feliks with all my heart, don’t get me wrong, but not in the way that you all seem to think. He and I have a very close history and we did live together for a long time, but there was never any of ...that. First and foremost, Feliks, for all his apparent bluster, is both quite shy and quite religious. He’s not interested in that sort of thing any more than I am
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Re: Sveiki, from Liet
anonymous
February 10 2010, 00:59:26 UTC
URK! Me, too!
"Litva" IS Russian for "Lithuania." I read all these fics about Ivan being like, "Rawr, Liet! You must speak in Russian only!!!" and then he himself is all 'Liet, Liet, Liet!' /rant
(Maybe if it was explained in-text about "And Russia calls him that to piss him off and belittle the bond he has with Poland" it would be acceptable.)
Re: Sveiki, from Liet
anonymous
February 11 2010, 03:45:17 UTC
No mention of all the fluffy bs with Poland? Oh right, writer anon must ship them obviously. Sure, they're friends I get it, but where's the independence, the sense of self, the pride and strength that Toris has? I don't see that here. AT least you didn't bash Russia.
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anonymous
February 11 2010, 09:41:52 UTC
Sorry if I sounded attacking, I'm no good at comments. You're right, it's a drabble thing, and everything can't be covered. Good job on what you did get to.
I don’t have too much time to write to you - the polędwiczki wołowe I’m making for dinner is roasting, and Poland should be here any minute - but I had a few things I wanted to address and I suppose it’s with him that I’ll start.
Poland. Not the beef sirloin.
I love Feliks with all my heart, don’t get me wrong, but not in the way that you all seem to think. He and I have a very close history and we did live together for a long time, but there was never any of ...that. First and foremost, Feliks, for all his apparent bluster, is both quite shy and quite religious. He’s not interested in that sort of thing any more than I am ( ... )
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"Litva" IS Russian for "Lithuania." I read all these fics about Ivan being like, "Rawr, Liet! You must speak in Russian only!!!" and then he himself is all 'Liet, Liet, Liet!' /rant
(Maybe if it was explained in-text about "And Russia calls him that to piss him off and belittle the bond he has with Poland" it would be acceptable.)
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I love how you wrote Lithuania! So very in-character, it sounds like he's really sitting down with pen and paper and writing a letter.
Thanks for pointing out that callling him "Liet" thing. Aww, he and Poland are still so close, Toris cooks for Feliks when he visits :)
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There's been a lot of doubling - and tripling - up of characters. I'd love to see another Toris one that does delve into this. <3
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