In Nomine Patris [1/2]
anonymous
February 9 2010, 12:27:16 UTC
Okay, this is the anon who promised ficcage for OP. Hope you like it!Romano makes a small noise in the back of his throat and clenches, tight and vice-like around the intruding fingers. It feels odd, tight and restrained beneath the prison of his clothes. From here in the shadows, the chancel seems overbright and hostile. He tries to look away from the face of Jesus on the Cross, bleeding for the sins of humanity, the sins of his people and finds that he can't
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In Nomine Patris [2/2]
anonymous
February 9 2010, 13:29:19 UTC
Hot, hot, hot. Everything seems as though it's on fire, even the air in his lungs and Romano doesn't even flinch when one of Gilbert's hands creep under his shirt to fondle first one nipple and then the other. He doesn't know why they haven't been seen or heard yet, doesn't understand how God can let this deed go unpunished.
Gilbert suddenly pulls halfway out and adjusts the angle of his thrust, hand trailing down from Romano's chest to fiddle with the zipper of his pants and take his cock in hand, before sliding back in. And all Romano can do is tremble and bite his lower lip to hold in his gasp because this sin, this is liquid sensation rippling along his nerves, making his cock twitch and back arch
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Quick Notes
anonymous
February 9 2010, 13:40:40 UTC
1) I'm very much aware that the German and Italian in this might be completely off-kilter. Apologies for that.
2) I'm not Catholic, so please excuse my ignorance on the subject matter.
The translation are as follows:
† Schau dir das Gesicht des Christus, seinen eingeborenen Sohn gegeben. - Look at the face of the Christ, God's only son.
† Betet für mich, kleine Italien. Bittet Gott um Vergebung. - Pray for me, little Italy. Beg God for forgiveness.
† O mio Dio, mi pento di aver offeso te, - Is the start of an Act of Contrition I translated into Italian.
† Was habt ihr denn da?! In einer Kirche, von allen Orten! Bist du verrückt völlig verrückt?! - What are you doing?! In a church, of all places! Have you gone completely mad?!
† Erst letzte Woche waren Sie und Veneziano ficken wie die Kaninchen in den Reichstag! - Just last week you and Veneziano were fucking like rabbits in the Reichstag!
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anonymous
February 9 2010, 16:03:47 UTC
Non-OP here. I love this! PruMano is becoming an OTP of mine, despite making no sense, just for how hot those two are - and your fill is a prime example of this. I especially love how you gave Romano a backbone instead of making him a blushing virgin, and Prussia being a complete bastard until the end is glorious.
Also, church & Catholicism = major kink of mine, so, you know, arf.
A nitpick: in case you de-anon, here's the current official version of the Act of Contrition (Atto di Dolore) in Italian:
Mio Dio, mi pento e mi dolgo con tutto il cuore dei miei peccati, perché peccando ho meritato i tuoi castighi, e molto più perché ho offeso te, infinitamente buono e degno di essere amato sopra ogni cosa. Propongo con il tuo santo aiuto di non offenderti mai più e di fuggire le occasioni prossime di peccato. Signore, misericordia, perdonami.
Also my German is limited to Guten tag, Bitte and Verdammt noch mal, but I think you had the brothers talk to each other with the formal Sie instead of the informal Du. But I don't know, really. Still
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Author!anon reporting in!
anonymous
February 9 2010, 16:26:41 UTC
Thank you for the Act of Contrition tidbit, anon! And yes, you're right about the Du and Sie mix up, but since my German is even more limited, I decided not to chance my own translational skills. Thank you for reading!
Re: Author!anon reporting in!
anonymous
February 9 2010, 23:33:32 UTC
Oh, no worries! I usually end up putting a lot of German or Spanish in my fills despite not knowing a word, so I know where you come from. Plus it's not like it was a turnoff ;-)
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Gilbert suddenly pulls halfway out and adjusts the angle of his thrust, hand trailing down from Romano's chest to fiddle with the zipper of his pants and take his cock in hand, before sliding back in. And all Romano can do is tremble and bite his lower lip to hold in his gasp because this sin, this is liquid sensation rippling along his nerves, making his cock twitch and back arch ( ... )
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2) I'm not Catholic, so please excuse my ignorance on the subject matter.
The translation are as follows:
† Schau dir das Gesicht des Christus, seinen eingeborenen Sohn gegeben. - Look at the face of the Christ, God's only son.
† Betet für mich, kleine Italien. Bittet Gott um Vergebung. - Pray for me, little Italy. Beg God for forgiveness.
† O mio Dio, mi pento di aver offeso te, - Is the start of an Act of Contrition I translated into Italian.
† Was habt ihr denn da?! In einer Kirche, von allen Orten! Bist du verrückt völlig verrückt?! - What are you doing?! In a church, of all places! Have you gone completely mad?!
† Erst letzte Woche waren Sie und Veneziano ficken wie die Kaninchen in den Reichstag! - Just last week you and Veneziano were fucking like rabbits in the Reichstag!
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Also, church & Catholicism = major kink of mine, so, you know, arf.
A nitpick: in case you de-anon, here's the current official version of the Act of Contrition (Atto di Dolore) in Italian:
Mio Dio, mi pento e mi dolgo con tutto il cuore dei miei peccati, perché peccando ho meritato i tuoi castighi, e molto più perché ho offeso te, infinitamente buono e degno di essere amato sopra ogni cosa. Propongo con il tuo santo aiuto di non offenderti mai più e di fuggire le occasioni prossime di peccato. Signore, misericordia, perdonami.
Also my German is limited to Guten tag, Bitte and Verdammt noch mal, but I think you had the brothers talk to each other with the formal Sie instead of the informal Du. But I don't know, really.
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That was the BEST fic EVER. I am just overflowing with happiness.
I think that the way you wrote it was like painting a picture of what was going on in my head... it was AMAZING. You have SKILLS.
I love the little tidbits of Italian and German in the fic too... I really like reading fics in which the characters speak their home language!
And oh. Germany and Italy. My God, that was the best. The Reichstag... wow. Very awesome. :)
THANK YOU SO MUCH, AUTHOR!ANON! <3 <3 <3
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Ahh, that has got to be one of the best Prumano fics I've read [at least that I can remember at the moment].
I love the ending~
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