What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1b/3)
anonymous
February 8 2010, 12:39:31 UTC
Not physically, they fight on, with all the enthusiasm of men knowing that they are merely dead men walking. They die and they die and they die, and when England finally calls for a retreat Australia doesn't know if he has enough liquid in him to weep for joy. He thinks that Turkey watches them leave, wonders if he is relieved that he is no longer a butcher. He doesn't really care, 'Zealand broke his leg a couple of days ago and even a nation will have trouble if such a thing healed incorrectly. He keeps his head down, narrowing his focus to New Zealand and the pesky task of keeping a nation fed and dry in a leaky ship as they make their way back to Egypt. It's worse when his leg heals and he wants to get up and walk around - the bone is still weak, Australia can tell, but New Zealand has always pretended to be fearless
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Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1b/3)
anonymous
February 8 2010, 12:43:53 UTC
No one saw that deanonSo he runs. He bolts out of that stinking, tiny room and into the hot sun. He runs out of the town, stumbling, blind as his eyes attempt to adjust to the change from the darkness of the room to the clean brightness of an Egyptian day. He falls to his knees, tears burning down his face. He hits the ground twice, open handed, and the pain of it seems to take aeons to reach his brain. By the time he does register that he hurts, he doesn't care, he's too busy mourning. He cries like a child, completely uninhibited. It isn't the few, polite sobs of society or the delicate tears that America's actresses cry in his films. He is sobbing, wailing. He rocks himself back and forward, curled up into a small ball in an attempt to hide. He gasps for breathe and keens again, a low, continuous sound of agony. His throat tightens, feels like a giant ball of muscle and pain, and he can't draw enough air in around it, sobs it out uselessly anyway. Then, there are hands on his shoulders, pulling him onto a warm lap and a hand cards
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Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1d/3)
anonymous
February 8 2010, 12:44:35 UTC
It's wet and almost slippery, and when Australia opens his mouth, New Zealand tastes like blood, he winces when Australia becomes harsher and drives his tongue deeper into the other's mouth, but makes no protest. Australia ceases to care after that, all that matters is the warm wetness of his brother nation's mouth and the firm, burning hot skin of his neck and chest. They kiss for several more moments - it sends shivers down Australia's spine and he moans as 'Zealand's hand firms on his hip, fingers stroking along and under his hipbone. Even through the thick material of his uniform Australia can feel his warmth, and his hands rise, shaking, to New Zealand's buttons, desperate for real skin on skin contact
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Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1d/3)
anonymous
February 9 2010, 08:00:39 UTC
I've heard Pom also might be short for "Pomegranate," based on how pink/red the British turned under the scorching Australian sun.
^_^ I love your description of Australia, particularly his self-deprecating, merciless portrayal of himself as - a stupid guy who's gotten into a fight and lost. Badly It almost breaks my heart, actually. Poor boy. I also adore the context that you've given them, to frame the sex/lust/attraction.
I really shouldn't ship New Zealand/Australia, I really shouldn't. T_T But I wrote it once and, well... it's still sticking around. -face palm- Why must I make everything I touch perverse?
I adore this, anon! New Zealand and Australia make me so happy, you have no idea (as a British!anon, no less). I just want to hold Australia forever right now.
And any kind of sex is fine, it's first experiences I'm interested in. So go with what you will! ^^
Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1d/3)
anonymous
February 9 2010, 11:58:10 UTC
As a fellow Aussie!anon, I have to admit...that you see both Australia and the Kiwi just the same as you do! (Including the movie star looks. I totally believe NZ is fiiiiine. XD) My poor, darling little nation though. I can't wait to see what you do here now!
Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1d/3)
anonymous
February 9 2010, 18:39:10 UTC
FANDOM NEEDS MORE AUSTRALIA, YES! <3 And your writing style is familiar to me, but I can't remember where I've read it before XD
Although small!Canadian anon would like to say that it is spelt "eh" because spelling it "Aye" makes us sound scottish pirates or like Arthur Fonzarelli ._.
Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1d/3)
anonymous
February 9 2010, 20:23:27 UTC
omg, I just died laughing. Now I want to see Canada as the Fonz and/or a Scottish pirate. XDDD
Although this America!anon has always wondered why it was spelled that way too. I didn't know that it was pronounce like "ay" until I heard my Canadian uncle say it a couple years ago. I always though it was pronounced "eh" as in "meh". :x
Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (1d/3)
anonymous
February 11 2010, 12:04:17 UTC
Opanon has written mostly Australia fills because Australia isn't in canon yet so he cannot be ooc, including one which I have lost the link to, and if anyone finds it, can you link me back to it? about Australia and his states (Victoria is a boy~) and this one: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/12046.html?thread=27314190#t27314190 about the first times that Australia fell in various loves. Lol, see a trend?
What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (2a/3)
anonymous
February 11 2010, 13:26:47 UTC
(This is taking anon forever, as Australia insists on being a shy virgin and New Zealand's too nice just to tie him down and take him like the whore I know he is. So, chapter 2 is now in two main parts
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Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (2b/3)
anonymous
February 11 2010, 13:27:43 UTC
Australia is so warm, tucked against his side like he is. He's warm and pliable, and is darting quick, shy kisses along his jaw line, which is about as high as the inebriated nation can reach. Best of all, when New Zealand offers to take him home, Australia simply looks at him and then beings to drag him in the general direction of his hotel
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Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (2c/3)
anonymous
February 11 2010, 13:29:02 UTC
New Zealand manages to drag his gaze from the bed and his mind from the gutter in favour of giving Australia (what he hopes is) a winning smile. His brother, however, seems to be thinking of other things but a simple response to his advances. Australia's face is downcast, he seems to be finding the pattern less, grey carpet extremely interesting. On an impulse, he reaches out and pulls the other nation closer, scrubbing a hand through his hair. Australia spasms widely in response, thrashing under his restraining arm. New Zealand grins and does it again. It's something that he always does before a rugby match (his excuse is that if it disorientates the nations, perhaps it'll disorientate the players too, Australia just accuses him of trying to steal his luck and occasionally his players). He stops, and while Australia is still distracted, pulls him into a chaste kiss. There's no tongues, no pressure, and while it makes New Zealand squirm a little on the inside (and not in a good way, but because he spends most of his time with
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Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (2a-c/3 Notes)
anonymous
February 11 2010, 13:31:55 UTC
Notes: Although there are no (as far as anon knows) full-blooded Maori left in New Zealand, basically everyone is part Maori. Pretty sure that they didn't know about endorphins/adrenaline during WW1. And this is where I hand you over to my sidekick, Willing Suspension Of Disbelief the 3rd, and her act, Artistic Licence. Just a quick note: Australia was federated in 1901. WW1 started 1914. Aus-tan is thirteen years old. If you take it from when we were settled, he's 127. Whoo boy, I'm lucky that Gallipoli is credited with giving Australian's a national identity (and therefore levelling up Aus-tan) because I don't particularly want to write shouta. Read it on the other hand… All Blacks = New Zealand rugby team. Aus/NZ rugby matches are the stuff of legend. At the beginning of every match, the NZ team does the Haka. It's awesome to watch. Anon hates rubgy (yes, she knows that this means that she is not a true Australia, she also hates Vegemite) but she still loves to watch the opening bits (she just watches the highlights of the rest as
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Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (2a-c/3 Notes)
anonymous
February 11 2010, 13:56:18 UTC
Gaaaaah. Aussie!anon from above...The one who meant to say she saw these guys the same as you...not...the retarded thing she wrote instead. XD Anyways. Man. Do we have a joint mind or something? Because I swear, you see them both just how I do. New Zealand is just...just like I see him. Proud of his Maori blood, tall(er than Australia. It's the mountains. XD), tough and a fighter. But still sweet and kind enough not to tie the kid down. XD And amusing.
Also. I love watching the Haka too. I hate rugby...and footy...and cricket...all sport actually (so unAustralian. XD The rest of my family love the sport...DX) but I love watching the All Blacks do the Haka. Veeeery impressive. And I always laugh at how massive they seem compared to our boys...who are themselves not that small. XD
Re: What Do You Mean, The Land Down Under's Never Been Down Under? (2a-c/3 Notes)
anonymous
February 11 2010, 16:53:59 UTC
I always figured that the personification of NZ would be a part Maori now, or at least mostly look like one. And by gods, they're huge (and gorgeous, of course).
-is not a Kiwi but spent a month in New Zealand-
Poor, frustrated New Zealand! XD But I adore his barely restrained horniness, his determination to not to pounce on his brother. The two of them have an amazing relationship without being too sappy, a brotherly relationship born from going through hell together.
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^_^ I love your description of Australia, particularly his self-deprecating, merciless portrayal of himself as - a stupid guy who's gotten into a fight and lost. Badly It almost breaks my heart, actually. Poor boy. I also adore the context that you've given them, to frame the sex/lust/attraction.
I really shouldn't ship New Zealand/Australia, I really shouldn't. T_T But I wrote it once and, well... it's still sticking around. -face palm- Why must I make everything I touch perverse?
I'm eagerly waiting the next installment! ^_^
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And any kind of sex is fine, it's first experiences I'm interested in. So go with what you will! ^^
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Although small!Canadian anon would like to say that it is spelt "eh" because spelling it "Aye" makes us sound scottish pirates or like Arthur Fonzarelli ._.
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Although this America!anon has always wondered why it was spelled that way too. I didn't know that it was pronounce like "ay" until I heard my Canadian uncle say it a couple years ago. I always though it was pronounced "eh" as in "meh". :x
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Although there are no (as far as anon knows) full-blooded Maori left in New Zealand, basically everyone is part Maori.
Pretty sure that they didn't know about endorphins/adrenaline during WW1. And this is where I hand you over to my sidekick, Willing Suspension Of Disbelief the 3rd, and her act, Artistic Licence.
Just a quick note: Australia was federated in 1901. WW1 started 1914. Aus-tan is thirteen years old. If you take it from when we were settled, he's 127. Whoo boy, I'm lucky that Gallipoli is credited with giving Australian's a national identity (and therefore levelling up Aus-tan) because I don't particularly want to write shouta. Read it on the other hand…
All Blacks = New Zealand rugby team. Aus/NZ rugby matches are the stuff of legend. At the beginning of every match, the NZ team does the Haka. It's awesome to watch. Anon hates rubgy (yes, she knows that this means that she is not a true Australia, she also hates Vegemite) but she still loves to watch the opening bits (she just watches the highlights of the rest as ( ... )
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Also. I love watching the Haka too. I hate rugby...and footy...and cricket...all sport actually (so unAustralian. XD The rest of my family love the sport...DX) but I love watching the All Blacks do the Haka. Veeeery impressive. And I always laugh at how massive they seem compared to our boys...who are themselves not that small. XD
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-is not a Kiwi but spent a month in New Zealand-
Poor, frustrated New Zealand! XD But I adore his barely restrained horniness, his determination to not to pounce on his brother. The two of them have an amazing relationship without being too sappy, a brotherly relationship born from going through hell together.
Can't wait for the next part!
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