Hourglass
anonymous
November 22 2009, 04:31:46 UTC
I care for you say the fingers combing through his hair.
You’re precious to me says the body pressed against him.
Stay with me says the leg curling around his.
“I love you.” Alfred’s mouth whispers in his ear.
It’s never these moments, never these, that Arthur doubts. These are the truest moments. The best moments, the most pure.
It’s the moments after, when he is drifting off to sleep, mind soft and sated, when he feels the flicker of something else in his mind, the quiet in the corner he suppresses though the day, the image it brings.
Alfred, crouching in the sand, picking up a handful and letting it slide through the gaps of his fingers. His bomber jacket is stained with dust and sweat, his hair pale and strawlike
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Authoranon
anonymous
November 24 2009, 19:46:23 UTC
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, OP! I hadn't intended on continuing it, but I've given it a bit of thought and I think I might. I'm still working out the details, but would OP mind too terribly much if it ended up an AU? I'm still going back and forth. I make no promises!
AU is fine, whatever author!anon is comfortable with. Just as long its the sweet UKxUS heart-wrenching treat I've asked for, I really don't mind at all.
I really hope author!anon continues this! I'll be keeping a close eye on this for now. :D
You’re precious to me says the body pressed against him.
Stay with me says the leg curling around his.
“I love you.” Alfred’s mouth whispers in his ear.
It’s never these moments, never these, that Arthur doubts. These are the truest moments. The best moments, the most pure.
It’s the moments after, when he is drifting off to sleep, mind soft and sated, when he feels the flicker of something else in his mind, the quiet in the corner he suppresses though the day, the image it brings.
Alfred, crouching in the sand, picking up a handful and letting it slide through the gaps of his fingers. His bomber jacket is stained with dust and sweat, his hair pale and strawlike ( ... )
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The length is perfect for what you've chosen to convey.
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Oh...Man I want more..
Is it okay if anon can continue it? ^^;
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Just as long its the sweet UKxUS heart-wrenching treat I've asked for, I really don't mind at all.
I really hope author!anon continues this! I'll be keeping a close eye on this for now. :D
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