{Drabble: The SuFin Edition}
anonymous
November 21 2009, 17:12:01 UTC
I’m sorry about Su-san’s speech. I don’t think I’ll ever get it down properly.
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Somewhere off in the distance (actually, just down the stairs to the left) there was a noise. Brrriiinnnnnnggggg! Brrriiinnnnnnggggg! Brrriiinnnnnnggggg! went the telephone, bothering Tino in the process
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Re: {Drabble: The SuFin Edition}
anonymous
November 22 2009, 07:41:36 UTC
It's a sweet drabble, though the brackets after Sweden's speech really distracted the flow imo. Perhaps just write his speech out in full and just make it short and succinct? (That's what I do, at least)
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Somewhere off in the distance (actually, just down the stairs to the left) there was a noise.
Brrriiinnnnnnggggg! Brrriiinnnnnnggggg! Brrriiinnnnnnggggg! went the telephone, bothering Tino in the process ( ... )
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Thank you very much for a very nice fill, Anon!
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