Cuban Cigars [1/?]
anonymous
November 25 2009, 01:19:13 UTC
This probably isn't quite what OP wanted, but the story kind of got away from me. Sorry! Also, I am lame at writing porn...but I tried. orz ------------------------
"Que carajo es esto?” Cuba growled through teeth clamped firmly around his favorite brand of cigar. It had been hand-rolled not even two miles away, by one of his citizens--a good man, with brown hands a face wrinkled to leather by the sun
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Cuban Cigars [2/?]
anonymous
November 25 2009, 01:23:40 UTC
“I know about you,” he continued. “Not everything maybe, but I’m not ignorant either. Not like everyone says.”
Cuba rolled his eyes. “Coño. Why don’t you just tell me what you want and leave, Americano?Without warning, America snatched the lighted cigar right out of Cuba’s mouth. When the island nation opened his mouth to yell, the blond crashed his own open lips into his
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Cuban Cigars [3/4]
anonymous
November 25 2009, 01:26:53 UTC
Cuba choked on his own protest. He reached a shaking hand, hesitated, then pressed down on the back of America’s head. He angled his hips has best as he could, and turned his face away, into the leather of the forgotten bomber jacket. He thrust mindlessly into the wet heat, every slurp and vulgar sound making his sweat-drenched skin break into goose bumps
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Cuban Cigars [4/4]
anonymous
November 25 2009, 01:30:09 UTC
Cuba still didn’t know what to think as America finished cleaning himself up. He found the cigar America had snatched from him before, and felt some calm as it found its familiar place between his teeth. America stared at its growing red tip with a sort of longing as he came over to retrieve his jacket. Cuba leaned forward in his seat to accommodate, and America was able to pick it up without hassle.
“Even with the smuggling, it’s hard to find authentic Cuban cigars back home,” he admitted.
“Grab the other cigar,” Cuba commanded suddenly. “I’ll light it for you before you leave.”
America looked surprised, then pleased as he eagerly snatched up the cigar he’d abandoned on the desk earlier. Cuba took it and gave a look of disapproval as he muttered, “Come mierda, look at how you cut it. See if it doesn’t unravel.” He gave it back to the blond, who popped it in his mouth and leaned forward as Cuba struck a wooden match.
When it was lit, America blew the first puff of smoke into Cuba’s face.
“Pinga! Get the fuck out of me and back to
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Re: Cuban Cigars [4/4]
anonymous
November 25 2009, 02:32:29 UTC
THIS ANON LOVES YOUUUU. AmxCuba (and vice versa) needs to be written more, like, pronto. The smut scene was fine, and potty mouth!Cuba is very in character (at least to me). 8D These years of studying Spanish helped a bit here.
Re: Cuban Cigars [4/4]
anonymous
November 25 2009, 04:38:38 UTC
I adore Cuba, and I was really glad to see him getting some attention, but this fill was great OTP aside. The emigration and Cold War references were well-played, and the dialogue was very nice. The bit about their kids visiting each other was probably my favorite snippit. You may think your porn is lame, but this line in particular was damn fine: "He thrust mindlessly into the wet heat, every slurp and vulgar sound making his sweat-drenched skin break into goose bumps.". Also, your America is completely and totally America. So, yeah, all in all, I loved it.
Re: Cuban Cigars [4/4]
anonymous
November 25 2009, 06:50:28 UTC
Oooh, I loved this! Have you ever heard "Guimello Tell" by Carlos Varela? The stuff America said about the immigrants and Cuba remind me of its lyrics!
America loves giving Cuba head when no ones looking?
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"Que carajo es esto?” Cuba growled through teeth clamped firmly around his favorite brand of cigar. It had been hand-rolled not even two miles away, by one of his citizens--a good man, with brown hands a face wrinkled to leather by the sun ( ... )
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Cuba rolled his eyes. “Coño. Why don’t you just tell me what you want and leave, Americano?Without warning, America snatched the lighted cigar right out of Cuba’s mouth. When the island nation opened his mouth to yell, the blond crashed his own open lips into his ( ... )
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“Even with the smuggling, it’s hard to find authentic Cuban cigars back home,” he admitted.
“Grab the other cigar,” Cuba commanded suddenly. “I’ll light it for you before you leave.”
America looked surprised, then pleased as he eagerly snatched up the cigar he’d abandoned on the desk earlier. Cuba took it and gave a look of disapproval as he muttered, “Come mierda, look at how you cut it. See if it doesn’t unravel.” He gave it back to the blond, who popped it in his mouth and leaned forward as Cuba struck a wooden match.
When it was lit, America blew the first puff of smoke into Cuba’s face.
“Pinga! Get the fuck out of me and back to ( ... )
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That was smoking hot. I love how you wrote Cuba's dialogue, their mutual animosity, and that part about the immigrants. So perfect.
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The emigration and Cold War references were well-played, and the dialogue was very nice. The bit about their kids visiting each other was probably my favorite snippit.
You may think your porn is lame, but this line in particular was damn fine: "He thrust mindlessly into the wet heat, every slurp and vulgar sound making his sweat-drenched skin break into goose bumps.".
Also, your America is completely and totally America.
So, yeah, all in all, I loved it.
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