Uncomfortable
anonymous
December 7 2009, 01:21:55 UTC
Your friendly anon will attempt to do this! (and probably fail) ~~~ "Romano-chan! It's time to cut your hair! Come over here, ok?" Bastard Spain called to me. I glared at him and then started to touch my hair possessively.
"Why. It's not long you freak!" I yelled back. He sighed and ran a hand through his own hair.
"Because it is getting long. Do you want to end up with my hair?" Spain asked. I shuddered as I looked at his poofy hair.
"Fine. Just get it over with quick." I muttered. I sat in the stool and gasped as I felt him touch that hair. "LET GO OF IT!" I yelled, squirming as I felt the bottom part of my body grow itchy. Spain looked at me funny.
"Don't worry Romano-chan! I need to start with this big one first because it makes you look lopsided."
"JUST ... Just ... just...!" My breath was coming out in pants now and I was barely able to sit still now.
"Stop squirming now. I'll be done soon." He noticed my squirming and then sighed. "All right. I'll save that hair for last, okay?" He then started to flaten it! I cried
( ... )
Re: Uncomfortable
anonymous
December 14 2009, 19:46:51 UTC
not necessarily true; iirc, in one episode of House, there was this really young girl that was eventually diagnosed with "finding nemo". she seemed fairly young to this anon (no more than 7), so why should it be any different with boys?
I suggest you get a beta
anonymous
April 15 2010, 20:55:05 UTC
Seriously, betas work wonders. This story is a bit awkward and rushed, with odd descriptions of the orgasm. Also, Spain is SPANISH. Why is he using Japanese suffixes? Fail, next time try chiquito, bebe, or mi corazon
So, I'd like to read about Spain, touching Romano's curl. And not letting go until Romano cums.
B: Romano screams. I don't care what- it can be curses at Spain or just out of pleasure. Just make him scream a lot^^
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"Romano-chan! It's time to cut your hair! Come over here, ok?" Bastard Spain called to me. I glared at him and then started to touch my hair possessively.
"Why. It's not long you freak!" I yelled back. He sighed and ran a hand through his own hair.
"Because it is getting long. Do you want to end up with my hair?" Spain asked. I shuddered as I looked at his poofy hair.
"Fine. Just get it over with quick." I muttered. I sat in the stool and gasped as I felt him touch that hair. "LET GO OF IT!" I yelled, squirming as I felt the bottom part of my body grow itchy. Spain looked at me funny.
"Don't worry Romano-chan! I need to start with this big one first because it makes you look lopsided."
"JUST ... Just ... just...!" My breath was coming out in pants now and I was barely able to sit still now.
"Stop squirming now. I'll be done soon." He noticed my squirming and then sighed. "All right. I'll save that hair for last, okay?" He then started to flaten it! I cried ( ... )
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One thing though: Can children that young even orgasm at all? I didn't think they could until after puberty.
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Also, Spain is SPANISH. Why is he using Japanese suffixes? Fail, next time try chiquito, bebe, or mi corazon
And the grammar needs work
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