A Harbor Near The Shore [1/??]
anonymous
October 24 2009, 22:31:05 UTC
PROLOGE: FEEBLE FORTRESS Peter lay curled up on his side, trying to bury himself deeper into the mattress. His blankets were pulled all the way over his head even though it turned his tiny sheet fortress into a stifling oven. He winced and shuddered as he heard his brother stumbling around downstairs, knocking things over and shouting at no one in particular.
Don’t come up. The small boy begged in his mind, wincing as he heard a particularly loud crash. Don’t come upstairs tonight.
“Worthless! All of them are so damn worthless!” Arthur shouted, throwing something that shattered against the wall. “Ungrateful little swine!” There was more crashing and shattering sounds, thumps and bangs.
Peter choked back a tiny sob that threatened to break out. It was bad tonight. Normally Arthur only go into one of his rages for an hour, but he was already running on three. Please don’t come upstairs. Forget about me. I don’t exist- I don’t exist!His arms were still covered in bruises from when Arthur had grabbed him last week, and his back was
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OP would like to also point out
anonymous
October 26 2009, 17:12:35 UTC
That 1. you didn't see her de-anoning because she fails...
and that two, in the event that this thread gets maxed out before you post the second part, could you please continue it in the past-part fills thread here? (http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10456.html) and then link it in the fill index?
I know I may sound rather callous for asking, but I'd hate to see this abandoned when it already looks so promising.
Re: OP would like to also point out
anonymous
October 27 2009, 05:00:13 UTC
Don't worry- I actually didn't see anything! Thine secret identity is safe for another day!
And sure thing! It doesn't really sound callous at all, just practical and rational, and there's nothing wrong with that. And thank you for saying you think it looks promising OP. <3 That really made my day about 100% better.
Oh, and the next update miiiiight take a couple more days then I originally planned. School decided to kick my butt and unexpectedly throw like three midterm assignments at me out of freaking nowhere. D: Sorry.
FEEBLE FORTRESS
Peter lay curled up on his side, trying to bury himself deeper into the mattress. His blankets were pulled all the way over his head even though it turned his tiny sheet fortress into a stifling oven. He winced and shuddered as he heard his brother stumbling around downstairs, knocking things over and shouting at no one in particular.
Don’t come up. The small boy begged in his mind, wincing as he heard a particularly loud crash. Don’t come upstairs tonight.
“Worthless! All of them are so damn worthless!” Arthur shouted, throwing something that shattered against the wall. “Ungrateful little swine!” There was more crashing and shattering sounds, thumps and bangs.
Peter choked back a tiny sob that threatened to break out. It was bad tonight. Normally Arthur only go into one of his rages for an hour, but he was already running on three. Please don’t come upstairs. Forget about me. I don’t exist- I don’t exist!His arms were still covered in bruises from when Arthur had grabbed him last week, and his back was ( ... )
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I can't wait to see the next part. :3
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and that two, in the event that this thread gets maxed out before you post the second part, could you please continue it in the past-part fills thread here? (http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/10456.html) and then link it in the fill index?
I know I may sound rather callous for asking, but I'd hate to see this abandoned when it already looks so promising.
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And sure thing! It doesn't really sound callous at all, just practical and rational, and there's nothing wrong with that. And thank you for saying you think it looks promising OP. <3 That really made my day about 100% better.
Oh, and the next update miiiiight take a couple more days then I originally planned. School decided to kick my butt and unexpectedly throw like three midterm assignments at me out of freaking nowhere. D: Sorry.
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