Icy (1/?)
anonymous
September 19 2010, 15:59:20 UTC
Prussia was always an opportunist, always taking every chance he got and never waiting for another, better one to come up. At his best, he was reckless, and it was hard to control his actions because practically nothing could faze him
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Icy (2/?)
anonymous
September 19 2010, 16:47:11 UTC
The snow around the brothers was cold, but the coldness Gilbert felt was different. This cold was inside him, and he turned with a shaking grin to face the Russian
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Re: Icy (2/?)
anonymous
September 21 2010, 03:51:22 UTC
Authornon, you just broke my heart with this. Poor Gilbert and Ludwig! D: D: D:
On another note, am I the only one who's feeling really, really guilty for enjoying this so much? :P Then again, I always love abusing the my favourite characters...
I seriously heart the OP who made this request and the authornon who wrote this. This fill is so bookmarked.
Icy (3/3)
anonymous
September 22 2010, 14:16:08 UTC
The Prussian sobbed dryly as Braginski built the pace, in and out and in and out and in and out. The little blood that didn't fall was lubricating him, but it hardly helped; he could still feel every searing inch, every torn tissue. Every time Russia did this to him, it was a little less painful than the last, but that didn't mean it stopped hurting.
Oh, no. Russia was sure of that, thrusting haphazardly and purposefully avoiding Gilbert's sweet spot, gripping his hips so tightly that purple bruises, shaped perfectly for his large hands, throbbed their way into existence.
After a while, Gilbert stopped screaming. As he couldn't see Russia's scowl, Ludwig thought that maybe it was done, and then -
His brother moaned, loudly and definitely not in pain. The sound made Ludwig's heart shatter - how could he have never assumed what that sick fuck was doing to his older brother? It was all his fault
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Re: Icy (3/3)
anonymous
September 23 2010, 12:36:33 UTC
Random anon here! And you're right - post it in the fill thing again to let readers know that you've updated (I stumbled in completely by chance btw ^^;;)
Anywayyyss. THIS. This fill makes me hurt for Gilbert. This line in particular really struck a chord with me:
"Prussia would have fought back. Hell, even the GDR, with Ulbricht at their mantle, would have resisted. But Gilbert was so tired..."
OUCH. And to imagine that the hell is not over yet...Gilbert still has roughly 20 more years to go through...Thanks for posting this fill authornon!
Re: Icy (3/3)
anonymous
September 27 2010, 05:17:22 UTC
drunk!commenter is back - and no longer drunk - although that might have helped her get through this. ;_;
Really, this whole thing was creepy and sad, but it was this line that really got to me: He leaned down and bundled the trembling man into his arms, wondering if Gilbert thought he was Ludwig as he gripped at the overcoat.
Bonus > Germany can hear his brtoher screaming from the other side
Ifeelsocruelwantingthis
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man, poor Ludwig :/ and, you know, poor Gilbert, because he's busy getting raped right now, but it would suck to have to listen to that.
alcohol does not dull my creepy feeling after reading this. *shivers* I want to hug Gilbert.
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On another note, am I the only one who's feeling really, really guilty for enjoying this so much? :P Then again, I always love abusing the my favourite characters...
I seriously heart the OP who made this request and the authornon who wrote this. This fill is so bookmarked.
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Oh, no. Russia was sure of that, thrusting haphazardly and purposefully avoiding Gilbert's sweet spot, gripping his hips so tightly that purple bruises, shaped perfectly for his large hands, throbbed their way into existence.
After a while, Gilbert stopped screaming. As he couldn't see Russia's scowl, Ludwig thought that maybe it was done, and then -
His brother moaned, loudly and definitely not in pain. The sound made Ludwig's heart shatter - how could he have never assumed what that sick fuck was doing to his older brother? It was all his fault ( ... )
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Anywayyyss. THIS. This fill makes me hurt for Gilbert. This line in particular really struck a chord with me:
"Prussia would have fought back. Hell, even the GDR, with Ulbricht at their mantle, would have resisted. But Gilbert was so tired..."
OUCH. And to imagine that the hell is not over yet...Gilbert still has roughly 20 more years to go through...Thanks for posting this fill authornon!
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Btw authornon, I posted an update for you at the Fills 2 page - http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/18224.html?view=54542384#t54542384
Whenever you start/update/complete a fill, just make a post like what I've done that the Fills 2 page. ^^
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Oh! Thank you for that! :)
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Really, this whole thing was creepy and sad, but it was this line that really got to me: He leaned down and bundled the trembling man into his arms, wondering if Gilbert thought he was Ludwig as he gripped at the overcoat.
asdfghjkl;'Gilbert. :'[
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I feel sooooo bad for grinning like a demented idiot while reading all this. MIEN GOTT THAT WAS GOOD!
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