Not That There's Anything Wrong With That.. 1a/?
anonymous
October 7 2009, 18:31:44 UTC
“Holy crap! You guys have a Burger Party every year and this is the first you’re telling me of it?”
Germany was tempted to take the invite back, just to spite America’s ignorance.
“Read it again. My people do not throw burger parties. Bürgerfest is the people’s celebration for German Unity Day. Which, for lack of my better judgment, you’re being asked to attend. My brother and I are holding a private function in Saarbrücken, now can I RSVP you?” Ludwig was not a man known for his patience, but reminded himself his duties of a host required some tact
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Not That There's Anything Wrong With That.. 1b/?
anonymous
October 7 2009, 18:35:36 UTC
“…. Thank you! Wow, I mean that’s just so flattering. You know, you always hear about how great Italian and French designers are, but us Americans are just as good! We’re practically the fashion capital of the world, but it’s still nice to hear someone say it.” Alfred was ecstatic as had threw his arms around the girls, all of whom seemed to share in his merriment
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Re: Not That There's Anything Wrong With That.. 2/?
anonymous
October 7 2009, 18:41:36 UTC
America’s head felt like it was spinning. Everyone, all of his peers, friends, and allies thought he was gay. For England. Arthur grabbed Hungary’s wrists and mechanically removed her from his person, still unsure on how someone’s supposed to respond to such news.
“Are you alright? We really didn’t mean to offend you…” Taiwan squeaked in, hoping Alfred would just say something. He had just looked ahead at nothing in particular, his face emotionless.
“No.”
“Excuse me?”
“I don’t think words exist for me to express how not cool I feel right now.” Alfred snapped, grabbing the bridge of his nose and squeezing.
“You’re being overly dramatic. It’s not like we outed you. You just have to come to terms with…” Hungary tried to put her hand on America’s shoulder, but he quickly moved aside.
“No! I don’t have comes to terms with anything! You can’t be outed if you were never in! I cannot be gay! I’m America! A good chunk of my country has a thing about that! I mean how… why… no! Just no!” Alfred groaned into his hands, wishing he could
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Oh my anon, you have no idea how happy I am that someone filled this! XDDD Thank you~
The beginning is great, and I giggled through most of the third part. Oh Alfred~ XDD I can't wait to see how it all ends up haha. Please do continue because you're doing great =D
Re: Not That There's Anything Wrong With That.. 4b/?
anonymous
October 11 2009, 08:06:49 UTC
“Angelique! Enough!” Arthur shouted as he held the smaller nation at arms length above him. Seychelles stilled in his grip, still refusing to relax completely.
“You've… you’ve never called me that before.” Seychelles blushed, eying the Brit suspiciously.
“And with good reason! It was the name that frog-bastard gave you. If I had it my way you’d be a Victoria…” Feeling her tense again above him, Arthur realized he’d taken them a step backwards.
“That’s always what it boils down to, your way. I am so sick and tired of your way! It’s not enough you make me prepare your tea, do your cleaning and attend your stupid etiquette lessons. No, you need me as your plan B arm-ornament for social-events whenever you and Alfred hit a rough spot. There is only so much you can expect an ‘underling’ to take before it’s just degrading! I know for a fact you never made Alfred or Matthew go through this. You save this special brand of humiliation for me!” Arthur bit his lip as Seychelles choked back a soft sob, unable to speak for a moment. Noticing
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Re: Not That There's Anything Wrong With That.. 4c/?
anonymous
October 11 2009, 08:15:50 UTC
Arthur felt his blush heat up his cheeks. When awakening this morning he’d been so confident in his approach to acquiring Seychelles as his date. He’d simply demand she join him, no questions asked. He hadn’t expected she’d, well, react in her typical manner. He wondered why he’d become so daft as to give her any say in this; as it only seemed to complicate matters. Accepting he’d never get his desired answer without this compromise, Arthur conceded
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Germany was tempted to take the invite back, just to spite America’s ignorance.
“Read it again. My people do not throw burger parties. Bürgerfest is the people’s celebration for German Unity Day. Which, for lack of my better judgment, you’re being asked to attend. My brother and I are holding a private function in Saarbrücken, now can I RSVP you?” Ludwig was not a man known for his patience, but reminded himself his duties of a host required some tact ( ... )
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“Are you alright? We really didn’t mean to offend you…” Taiwan squeaked in, hoping Alfred would just say something. He had just looked ahead at nothing in particular, his face emotionless.
“No.”
“Excuse me?”
“I don’t think words exist for me to express how not cool I feel right now.” Alfred snapped, grabbing the bridge of his nose and squeezing.
“You’re being overly dramatic. It’s not like we outed you. You just have to come to terms with…” Hungary tried to put her hand on America’s shoulder, but he quickly moved aside.
“No! I don’t have comes to terms with anything! You can’t be outed if you were never in! I cannot be gay! I’m America! A good chunk of my country has a thing about that! I mean how… why… no! Just no!” Alfred groaned into his hands, wishing he could ( ... )
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I'll try to have part 3 up by this Friday/Saturday.
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Do be careful on the names, though. I think you called Alfred "Arthur" on one occasion. >__>;;
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UUUUHGGGGGGHHHHH!!!! Thanks
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The beginning is great, and I giggled through most of the third part. Oh Alfred~ XDD I can't wait to see how it all ends up haha. Please do continue because you're doing great =D
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OMG, wouldn't it be something for Alfred to fall for a BRITISH GIRL and Arthur go for an AMERICAN GIRL?!?!?!?!?!
BWAHAHA, am manipulating you!!
(no one saw that deanon!fail) >__>;;
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(And as far as I saw, I don't think there were any errors in this one. You did great!)
I'm so happy, I could dance around my room right now 8D
Can't wait for the next update~
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“What do you think it means!”
“I think it means you were foolish enough to think I was asking, girl ( ... )
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“You've… you’ve never called me that before.” Seychelles blushed, eying the Brit suspiciously.
“And with good reason! It was the name that frog-bastard gave you. If I had it my way you’d be a Victoria…” Feeling her tense again above him, Arthur realized he’d taken them a step backwards.
“That’s always what it boils down to, your way. I am so sick and tired of your way! It’s not enough you make me prepare your tea, do your cleaning and attend your stupid etiquette lessons. No, you need me as your plan B arm-ornament for social-events whenever you and Alfred hit a rough spot. There is only so much you can expect an ‘underling’ to take before it’s just degrading! I know for a fact you never made Alfred or Matthew go through this. You save this special brand of humiliation for me!” Arthur bit his lip as Seychelles choked back a soft sob, unable to speak for a moment. Noticing ( ... )
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