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Retribution [10/??] anonymous July 22 2009, 10:05:30 UTC
OP: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/9482.html?thread=12783114#t12783114
America takes revenge for being gang-rapedYao didn’t have a chance to respond. A knife landed right by his knee ( ... )

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Re: Retribution [11/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 04:44:42 UTC
It makes total sense to me that after something like that Alfred would become much more ... Republican. Yes let's go with that. If you watch Fox News (the notoriously conservative channel for those non-American!Anons) and listen to John McCain (the old white guy who ran against Obama) it's all about how Obama isn't taking a hard enough line on places like Iran and North Korea and is opening us up to a second attack.

Grrr Francis I hope you get something really nasty now. And I hope it involves Canada in some way (a non-harmful to Canada way, though France doesn't need to know that.) France has always been a bit of twit (de Gaulle much?)

Obviously what you should do now Alfred is to leave them to fend for themselves. (North Korea for example comes to mind, and their recent suggestion about diplomatic talks. This is what I mean, since Obama is much more willing to do it than Bush was. I can't find the American article but it thought two-party talks were a good idea ( ... )

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Re: Retribution [11/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 06:43:00 UTC
Anon, let's avoid tagging a news channel that gives most of its donations to Democrats as conservative, okay? Actually, let's avoid talking politics altogether, okay?

France IS going to ask about Matthew again, and that's going to pave the way for Russia's punishment.

Now, there's a problem with the "leaving them to fend for themselves" thing. You know how Alfred didn't finish his sentence when he talked about how he'd kill anyone who messed with them? What he was about to say was "Even after everything you did to me, I still would."

He stopped because he didn't want THEM to know that.

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Re: Retribution [11/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 07:20:35 UTC
The last two lines made me giddy. I think I like unstable!Alfred more than I should.....8D

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Retribution [12/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 17:33:25 UTC
“…thew…” Francis mumbled under his breath ( ... )

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Re: Retribution [12/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 17:39:33 UTC
Oh god oh god ogodogod. This is my favorite part so far. He's PERFECT when facing off Russia. Oh god yes, America. He actually managed to shut Russia up. And it's got to phase even Russia, that threat.

And sort of ow - Arthur and Francis would 'never harm Matthew' - but totally okay with harming Al?

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Re: Retribution [12/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 17:40:23 UTC
Finally! Ivan!! XD
Oh, man, writer!anon this has me at the edge of my seat every time I read it! Oh, Matty! I still worry about him even if Alfred says he didnt touch him ;A;

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Re: Retribution [12/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 17:59:39 UTC
CUT IT OFF. CUT IT OFF.

bastards who commit rape should have their dicks cut off so they can't rape anyone else ever again.

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Re: Retribution [12/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 18:17:14 UTC
Writer!anon recognizes youuuu. Sorta. You're one of the anons who felt more bad for Alfred than the others, right? And Alfred totally understands your feelings.

So if we cut of the dicks of men who commit rape so they can never rape again, what about women who commit rape?

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Re: Retribution [12/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 22:07:10 UTC
Ah, sorry, writer-anon, but that would be me XD Though I'm glad to see I'm not alone in my sentiments.

...And I have no clue what you'd do O_O You can't really remove anything >>

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Re: Retribution [12/??] anonymous July 29 2009, 15:41:54 UTC
different anon completely but there is always female castration. Which is what some countries did to women way way way back so they didn't get any pleasure from sex.

Okay I'll be quiet now |D;

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Retribution [13/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 18:49:23 UTC
(I wasn't planning on posting two parts today, anons. But after I posted part 12, a plot bunny suddenly attacked me. Here, we learn just how screwed up in the head Alfred is. Comic!anon, if you're still reading this, I'm sorry if this includes some stuff you didn't plan on putting into the comic)

Ivan stared at Alfred in shock.

“Yes, that’s what I should do!” Alfred said cheerfully. “After all, it’ll ensure that you can’t rape me or anyone else ever again!”

He picked the knife out of the table and stabbed another part of the table.

“Hey, Russia?” He asked curiously.

“Y-yes?” Ivan said with a smile.

“Did you ever make Lithuania and the others say “thank you”, like you did with me?”
“…what?”
“Remember? After you were done, you made thank you for raping me. I know. Everyone else made me thank them, too.”

He sounded like a child who was revealing something he thought that no one else knew.

“Alfred, please…” Arthur said desperately, trying to avoid looking at Alfred. “Please, just stop“Why? It’s the truth.” Alfred said in an ( ... )

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Re: Retribution [13/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 18:57:39 UTC
O_O omgomgomg!! This! AAAAHHHH!!!!!
Oh anon, as much as I love seeing insane!Alfred, I still fear for the others. And Kiku, I have a feeling he will be next O.o

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Re: Retribution [13/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 19:36:37 UTC
Never has vengeance looked so awesome....:D
The tension was so thick a knife could cut through it.
Although I get why Kiku would try to apoligize, Alfred had a point.
Kiku apologized before for Pearl Harbor, the Bataan Death March and the treatment of American soldiers in their camps.
After him being saying sorry for so many things, I would problems believing him.
In fact, I would furious. How he say he's sorry now that I'm taking revenge! I would believe he's sorry because I'm about to do something awful to him. That would make me very angry, and I would "see" if he's truly sorry.
No one saw me deanon....

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Re: Retribution [13/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 20:17:05 UTC
Oh goddddd, the tension is killing me! Anon, this is so good!

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Re: Retribution [13/??] anonymous July 28 2009, 21:09:11 UTC
A-awesome! I love it! Please continue soon, i wonder what kiku's punishment will be? Did i sound a bit like a sadist?

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