Title: Some things never change
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Peter/Nathan
Warning: Petrellicest, underage, graphic m/m, profanity
Notes: For
heroes_flashfic Challenge #2 In the Beginning,
heroes50 Prompt #7 Swim
Thanks: to
technosage for a fantastic beta and cheering. Any remaining problems are all mine.
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It's always been this way )
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I love your fics. I love the way you portray the brothers. And I love the way that Peter's the one that starts it and Nathan doesn't ever object.
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I love your construct of their relationship.
If he can't marry his mom, then Peter wants to marry Nathan, Nathan's almost his age after all and Peter loves him more than anything.
This has got to be my favorite line. It just made me melt inside.
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and yeah, I really liked that part too because it's something so many little kids say (about marrying their mom or dad) and it makes sense that Peter's been intense about Nathan even since before there was something wrong with it.
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I love this. So very much. My favorite would have to be the first one, if only because Nathan holding Peter's head under the water is so damn brother-y. XD
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Nathan holding Peter's head under the water is so damn brother-y
That was exactly what I was going for, boys rough housing in the water! They really are boys so much of the time.
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*hearts*
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and thank you!
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I especially love the last line; solid closing.
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And you just KNOW Nathan would want Peter to call him that, you know it!
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