Some things never change by Katarin

Oct 09, 2006 15:52

Title: Some things never change
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Peter/Nathan
Warning: Petrellicest, underage, graphic m/m, profanity
Notes: For heroes_flashfic Challenge #2 In the Beginning, heroes50 Prompt #7 Swim
Thanks: to technosage for a fantastic beta and cheering. Any remaining problems are all mine.

It's always been this way )

02- in the beginning

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corsiva October 9 2006, 23:32:39 UTC
HOT!

I love your fics. I love the way you portray the brothers. And I love the way that Peter's the one that starts it and Nathan doesn't ever object.

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just_katarin October 9 2006, 23:39:25 UTC
thanks! and yeah, the brother aspect of their relationship is what makes it so hot, because they are connected and the physical part is a reflection of that.

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lovin it teardropdangel October 9 2006, 23:34:54 UTC
Yum...Petrellicest *eyes gaze over*

I love your construct of their relationship.

If he can't marry his mom, then Peter wants to marry Nathan, Nathan's almost his age after all and Peter loves him more than anything.

This has got to be my favorite line. It just made me melt inside.

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Re: lovin it just_katarin October 9 2006, 23:41:11 UTC
Thank you so MUCH!

and yeah, I really liked that part too because it's something so many little kids say (about marrying their mom or dad) and it makes sense that Peter's been intense about Nathan even since before there was something wrong with it.

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ex_octavius225 October 9 2006, 23:49:00 UTC
Oh, Peter. Oh, Nathan. Oh, boys.

I love this. So very much. My favorite would have to be the first one, if only because Nathan holding Peter's head under the water is so damn brother-y. XD

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just_katarin October 10 2006, 03:56:10 UTC
Thank you so much.

Nathan holding Peter's head under the water is so damn brother-y

That was exactly what I was going for, boys rough housing in the water! They really are boys so much of the time.

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revelininsanity October 10 2006, 00:26:18 UTC
Is this- Is this the first Petrelli-cest fic ever?

*hearts*

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just_katarin October 10 2006, 00:42:49 UTC
*cough* not really*cough*

and thank you!

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neur0vanity October 10 2006, 01:19:08 UTC
Awesome, awesome, awesome. So hot and well-written.

I especially love the last line; solid closing.

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just_katarin October 10 2006, 07:13:40 UTC
thank you!

And you just KNOW Nathan would want Peter to call him that, you know it!

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