[smapfic] that time we had the world
happy birthday, g_pumpkin
you deserve way more than this and more will come some day but asdfg that's the least i can offer and i hope you'll like. *hugs*, hoping this will be a great year for you and that we'll continue flailing like pro flailers over many things. ♥
that time we had the world
( Kimu/Tsu; pg; 718 words | Kimura will look determined enough and Shingo will admit he would probably be a little bit scared himself, if it were him )
you deserve way more than this and more will come some day but asdfg that's the least i can offer and i hope you'll like. *hugs*, hoping this will be a great year for you and that we'll continue flailing like pro flailers over many things. ♥
that time we had the world
( Kimu/Tsu; pg; 718 words | Kimura will look determined enough and Shingo will admit he would probably be a little bit scared himself, if it were him )
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I miss SMAP fic. I am a bad mod. I should be encouraging people and making them write. But right now 99% of my brain is filled with SHERLOCK JOHN SHERLOCK JOHN SHERLOCK JOHN
I still love SMAP though. Especially SMAP slash.
I like your rhythmic, run-on sentences, the talk of invasion, and Shingo as a sort of witness and encourager or of Kimura and Tsuyoshi's thing. Lovely. Lovely.
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actually, i was planning to whine about the lack of SMAP fic recently and maybe harass you about a new anon meme or something, but then i think i lost momentum. so, uh, can't blame you. ^.^;
the Shingo POV jumped me out of nowhere, i don't even know why, but it kind of made sense. although i wasn't sure how much sense the whole thing would make, 'cause there was like, so so much more history to the Kimu Tsuyo thing, but, as per usual, it stayed mostly in my head.
thank you thank you ♥
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I love it... it has such a sweet mood... I love all those "one too many Shingos", "invading Nakai"... and everything... Also the image of Shingo being probably scared himself... (and I'm once again unable to express myself in words... How I hate that...)
So, you're finally freed from TsuTaku fanfic, huh? :D Congrats on that :D
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aww, thank you :* i'm glad that the sweet mood gets through, although i swear to god i have no idea where it came from, because up till now i only saw taku/tsu as something porn-inspiring. well maybe it's the shingo addition.
and nope, i still have a number of tsutaku plot bunnies hopping around. >.>' /hopeless
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Yeah, take anything and add Shingo and you get sweetness that threats with cavity :P
Aw, bunnies are dangerous, they reproduce so fast :P
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YOU BET THEY FUCKING DO~ D:
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it makes me happier than it should that you can say it's recognisable. i promised myself i would try something different, but uh, i fall back into these little images most of the time. and thank you so so much.
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Geez, I just rambled on didn't I?
So what I really wanted to say was that I really liked this whole thing but I really just want to quote the entire paragraph that's in future tense but I will resist and say that I love this line so hard:
They will go to Kimura’s where they will proceed to make a mess of the place and of themselves and Tsuyoshi will end up sitting on the floor next to Kimura, back against the couch, from which Shingo’s hand will hang down playing with his hair but Tsuyoshi won’t even notice, too aware of Kimura’s leg stuck between his. The tension that is soooo palpable it's gorgeous ( ... )
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and thank you. <333 somehow i'm quite pleased with this fic, something i can't say about most i've written, so it means all the more. and yay for you trying to get back into SMAP action. :D not that i've been all that much around >.>'
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