Alice in Wonderland - To Distraction

Jul 29, 2010 21:20

Title: To Distraction
Rating: R (mostly suggestive)
Disclaimer: The characters and settings referred to here are not mine. No infringement is intended and no profit is made.
Author's note: Experimenting with something new again, namely Alice/Hatter. I wrote this ficlet for the prompt "size matters" at the Porn Battle. As always, thanks to geekmama for ( Read more... )

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jenthegypsy July 29 2010, 19:43:03 UTC
Alice and Hatter. Squeeee!

You've no idea how your writing of them thrills me! (Well, perhaps you do, since I requested them in a sentence, and you thought you might not be able to do them...) So very perfect, with luminous, chameleon eyes and a distracted litany of textures. And Alice, so naughty, not wearing stockings and taking advantage of a less cluttered side table.

Remarkably atmospheric and character correct in just a few words - your gift, as it has always been!



ETCorrect, as I've forgotten how to make a ♥ in my excitement.

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hereswith July 30 2010, 17:47:07 UTC
I wouldn't have thought to write this if you hadn't requested that sentence, so it's all your fault ;-) Since it was the first time writing Alice, though, I'm really glad you thought it worked. Thanks so much and a ♥ right back!

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just_a_dram July 29 2010, 20:22:29 UTC
I like that you didn't go an obvious route with 'size matters' and it is still very hot.

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hereswith July 30 2010, 18:40:21 UTC
I suspect that was what the person who left the prompt had in mind, but it felt a little too obvious. Thank you for reading and commenting, I will try to catch up with your new chapters as soon as I can!

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djarum99 July 30 2010, 01:09:46 UTC
the room so full of sunlight, the door unlocked and the windows open

Somehow that's the most erotic part, and it's all so lovely, so sensual, and you wrote Alice/Hatter!!!

♥twirls♥

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hereswith July 30 2010, 22:50:26 UTC
Somewhat surprisingly, I did :-) I'm very happy you liked it. ♥

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rhymerslog July 30 2010, 11:28:42 UTC
*flops down dead*

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*opens one eye to glare at lack of appropriate icons*

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hereswith August 1 2010, 17:47:08 UTC
So glad you enjoyed it. *g*

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luxuria_oceanus July 31 2010, 04:39:29 UTC
I've said it once, I'll say it again: I'll probably read anything you write, especially if I know the fandom. You say so much with so little and it's just so good. Thank you for writing and any excuse you get for writing is AWESOME by me.

Prompts are ♥

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hereswith August 1 2010, 21:07:16 UTC
Prompts work really well as both excuse and motivation :-) Thank you so much. ♥

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