Comments | herbailiwick: Poem, 3/12/11

herbailiwick

Poem, 3/12/11

Mar 12, 2011 09:51

( 3/12/11 )

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[ so far, this is the best part of my day ] supes_ March 12 2011, 16:32:15 UTC

this was very therapeutic for me as well. <3

the fact that it's so well-written, and also hilarious, does not hurt either.

:D:D

Re: [ so far, this is the best part of my day ] herbailiwick March 12 2011, 18:39:15 UTC

I'm very glad you found it therapeutic as well! And that you liked it, and found it funny. I still can't believe what terrible attitudes everyone was expressing.

Re: [ so far, this is the best part of my day ] misdreya March 12 2011, 22:38:22 UTC

I CAN BELIEVE IT.

THAT PLACE MAN.

THAT PLACE IS LIKE A KILLING FIELD. XD

I'll second supes on the hilarious and well written. She said what I was going to. ;)

Re: [ so far, this is the best part of my day ] herbailiwick March 12 2011, 22:43:33 UTC

GLAD YOU LIKE IT, BABES!

It really is like a fuckin'. Circus. Of shame and death. Or something.

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acroamatica March 13 2011, 05:06:22 UTC

Just dropping by to say: THIS.

herbailiwick March 13 2011, 05:07:19 UTC

Hee! Thank you very, very much. I really appreciate it.

m_annalore March 14 2011, 00:31:48 UTC

I was sent here by supes_. Reading this poem reminded me of a wanky incident in my own life. To be honest, I don't even remember what happened, but I had to dig out my binder of writing to look this up.

What you say about me when I'm not around --
Well that's just not my concern.
What you think of me...
I just couldn't care less.

Turn my back, blow you off,
See how cavilier I can be.
Turn you off, shut you down,
See how much this isn't hurting me.

I flaunt myself, take a bow,
And let the curtain close.
I smile again, but my eyes now burn
I don't know how to care less.

herbailiwick March 14 2011, 02:20:19 UTC

AWESOME. I really love it. Particularly, "I smile again, but my eyes now burn".

Dude, I just looked through my document of poetry from high school, and I got something that also could apply to what I wrote about up there, probably:

To Be Alike, In Fitting InOh, to be that which doth persecute ( ... )

m_annalore March 14 2011, 09:20:58 UTC

Thanks. :) Most of my poetry is complete and utter crap as I rediscovered last night, but there are a couple I still like.

I was looking at fanficrants again, and man, some of that stuff is a lot meaner than I thought it was, some of it for absolutely no reason at all. I'm not really that nice polite of a person in general, but it kind of shocked me. I mean, if random OCs are people, shouldn't, I dunno, people also be treated like people?

But it's got nothing to do with me, so I'm trying to ignore the train wreck and move on.

herbailiwick March 14 2011, 09:27:20 UTC

shouldn't, I dunno, people also be treated like people?
YES. This is just like something I believe supes_ said today. YES.

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