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for youniqorn

Dec 25, 2012 17:15

Title: Two Quarters (and a Heart) Down
For: youniqorn
Pairing: Jaehyo/Kyung
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1219
Summary: Maybe it is or maybe it isn't, but it's time to figure it out.
Notes/Warnings: Dear recipient, I apologize in advance. But if you want, get in touch with me afterwards, because this story literally got a universe all its own.

( To YOUNIQORN, From: Your Secret Santa! )

rating: pg-13, pairing: jaehyo/kyung, #2012, gen

Comments 3

youniqorn December 26 2012, 06:31:16 UTC

SANTA, I CURRENTLY HAVE FAMILY/FESTIVE OBLIGATIONS BUT I'LL BE BACK TO SCREAM AND READ AND FLAIL SOON! Wait for me, my darling Santa ;~~~~~~; thank you so much for writing not just one but TWO of my prompts, and the ones I wanted to read most too omg ♥♥♥♥

youniqorn December 26 2012, 14:47:31 UTC

santa-anon, i'm going to treat you to many comments of flailing and possible crying ok. i'll try to be polite or whatever but i will address these comments to you as if you are my friend and we have been friends forever so please don't mind n__n ALSO if we are not friends already, we must be, come reveals, and i will never let you go so please anticipate my clinging u__u

He leaves his jacket on, in fear of ruining his purple cape, and leans against the outer edge of bleachers.
firstly, my lovely santa, i'd love to know how you think their uniforms look, because i for one was in love with how professional and well-put-together my own uniform was when i was in band ;~; i hope we'll be able to talk about it after reveals!

flkaslkaflkjalkjs trumpet for taeil sounds very very nice and fitting!

Jihoon steps in front of Yukwon, who is soaked by this point, and Jiho dumps the rest of the bottle’s content on his own face.
;a; this is an adorable image and i love how they're just such boys here ;A;

Jaehyo notices Jiho staring in his ( ... )

youniqorn December 26 2012, 14:53:27 UTC

honestly i just want to quote the entire kiss scene under the bleachers, but i won't. instead i will proceed to just tell you how much i love the scene you've set. i adore the silent anticipation coming from kyung, and how he takes action when jaehyo almost chickens out. the little details like kyung's damp hair and the music in the background is lovely too, and i love how you've managed to capture the place where they are and how they technically don't have time for a confession or a kiss because they should be back on the bleachers, not under. and it's just lovely how even though you've kept the setting present and there in the scene, it's still something private and wonderful, the two of them away from it all, and i love how you've portrayed jaehyo's feelings, how much he's wanted to kiss kyung and how the world, not them, should stop in that moment ;______; the mix of the game's atmosphere and the privacy of their kiss was just something amazing to read, loud but quiet at the same time, and i have so many feelings for what you've ( ... )