FIC: Brother's Keeper, pairing Nathan/Peter, NC-17, chapter 34

[henrika_amanda]

Alright folks, just be warned, you might see a different side of Nathan in this chapter... :)

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Title: Brother's Keeper

Authors: henrika_amanda  &  pilar_sama

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Nathan/Peter… and more in future chapters

Summary: The year Peter graduates high school, his big brother Nathan takes him out on a 3-week long camping trip… which will forever change the lives

Comments

[houseluvsthewho]

oooo yay!!!! ive been waiting for this. loved ur descriptions of nathan's angst over his arousal. <3 cant wait for the next chapter

[henrika_amanda]

Yay, now this story is officially Petrellicest! :)

[chibiariane]

33 chapters have passed and now it happened!! Nathan did it!
But it is really sad that he feels so bad about it. Peter loves him and wants him to touch him like this but of course I kinda understand Nathan's feelings. :/

Oh and he just flew!! Yeah! I really loved this chapter! <3 It was hot and angsty and Nathan's ability started to manifest. :D Great! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Now one of my favourite parts:

"Oh!" Nathan replied with a laugh. "So are we two chicks or am I the mother hen?"

Cuuuute. :D Nathan, the mother hen. Heh. <3

[henrika_amanda]

33 chapters have passed and now it happened!! Nathan did it!
But it is really sad that he feels so bad about it. Peter loves him and wants him to touch him like this but of course I kinda understand Nathan's feelings. :/

LOL yes, finally. :) Nathan feels he's abused his power as Peter's caretaker by doing that, and since Peter is dependent on him, and there's such an obvious power imbalance, it's a huge issue for Nathan.

Oh and he just flew!! Yeah! I really loved this chapter! <3 It was hot and angsty and Nathan's ability started to manifest.

I can promise you, it's not the last we've seen of Nathan's ability in this story...

[sakura_no_mi]

OMG, I seriously held my breath through that part where Nathan "helped" Peter with his dream. Poor Nathan :( I can see how he'd feel guilty though... and he thinks that maybe his feelings for Peter are a psychological response to the trauma that they experienced together? That's what I think anyway :)

[henrika_amanda]

You're definitely right about Nathan's thoughts. He doesn't see his attraction to Peter as anything healthy but fights it with all means necessary. Which is sort of understandable since he practically raised Peter, so now he feels like a child molester.