[Fic] Shattered.

Feb 18, 2007 02:27

Title: Shattered 1/1

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: YooSu

Rating:  PG-13; angsty.

A/N: Inspired by sad, not-so-love songs. I need to bury my angst monster before working on my crack Jaepi.

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“Going out tonight?” Jaejoong asks, leaning against the bathroom door as he watches Yoochun splash on after-shave. Yoochun checks his appearance in ( Read more... )

fic: shattered, dbsk, yoosu, fic

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wedschilde February 18 2007, 07:42:05 UTC
oh i loved this! :::hugs::: so much angst. i loved the callous chun!

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 07:47:27 UTC
Fast - I only just finished cross-posting!

...I think LB is influencing me, i never write YooSu/JunChun. But I'm always up for new things :)

Thanks! *cookies*

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wedschilde February 18 2007, 07:48:17 UTC
oh i simply adored it! i loved their interaction! ::::grins:::

ooo...cookies!

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 07:59:11 UTC
cookies are fun - almost as fun as the Vanilla Rooibois tea (no idea what it means, all i know is it's african and tasty.) I'm having. Yum.

my gran spent my whole childhood trying to get me to drink tea and i refused. Now watch me. Meh.

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sadotsu February 18 2007, 08:05:05 UTC
Did I read that right?? Jaepi??? As in Jae, and... YAMAPI??? *_*

I love it when Junsu is assertive &hearts . But also when he just can't resist Yoochun :DDDDD.

I find YunJae SO much hard to connect to than Yoosu, for some reason - -;;.

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 08:11:04 UTC
Yep - Jaepi! *is dead*. It's total crack for the jaexanyone comm event. Check it out next week!

And Chunnie is totally irresistable *distracted by Choosey Lover PV*.

I discovered YunJae first. My first ever K-pop OTP :) So I just... get them better (and i youtubed all things Yunjae for about a week straight :p)

Thanks for reading and glad you liked it!

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sadotsu February 18 2007, 08:13:24 UTC
*harder*, I mean. *_*

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 08:16:27 UTC
No problem - you should see my typos... I have my own dictionary of words, based on the fact that my 'j' key sometimes hates me *fails*

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akakame February 18 2007, 08:07:54 UTC
~sigh~..i wish they make a movie out of this...

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 08:11:52 UTC
*blushes and grins*

Thank you!! ♥
Glad you liked it!

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akaxiah February 18 2007, 08:18:55 UTC
ow.. ow.. this fic really hurt :/

you wrote it really well, despite your claim of yoosu being hard to connect to. i do hope you write more~

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 08:23:56 UTC
I guess the hurt you're feeling is a bit of what Junsu feels right now *pets*

Thank You for the compliment - the truth is, Yoochun in particular is difficult for me to capture (without being all playboy/ho-ish, which i dont want). But I had to give it a try when this idea popped inot my head.

Thanks for reading!

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akaxiah February 18 2007, 18:25:56 UTC
maybe if you write more, it'll come easier. (so write more :D)

your want to capture a different side of yoochun is actually quite intruiging. hope to see some of that in the next 24 hours. haha, kidding. but will be waiting for your next stories :)

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 19:05:18 UTC
I see Chun's whole playboy side as such a cover sometimes. Like, he hides behind it for protection. And this comes form hearing him talk about his whole family situation on YSMM. He uses it to protect people from getting to close. At least, that's what I see.

I was actually working on a Chun-centric piece, i hope to have time to finish it this week while i have some time off school.

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sharkbait_ha February 18 2007, 08:53:13 UTC
Gah, the angst...
I love it. You did a nice job~ :)

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 09:02:50 UTC
thank you! *sparkles*

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