[Fic] How to Save a Life pt. 3

[helzfyah]

Title: How to save a life (3/3) - END

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: Jaeho, Jae/?

Rating: R, for adult themes

Warnings: mentions of drug abuse, addiction, and sexual relations while under the influence

Summary: What happens when a past love reappears in Jaejoong’s life and stirs up old memories he would rather forget?

A/N: Inspired, very loosely

Comments

[callmeliyah]

Oh..that was perfect. <3 I love how YunHo loves Jae Joong enough to know when NOT to protect him...or at least he tries not to. It's sweet. ^^ And even though the ending does leave you a little like T_T.., haha, its okay if you stopped since it does get hard to write about something youre unfamilar with..At least you didnt go into another chapter of possibly-unrealistic ranting about drugs. Haha. Good job <33 This was a great ficcie ^^

[helzfyah]

Thanks for the great comment, and I'm glad you stuck around to enjoy it.

And yeah - it was getting hard to keep up the momentum on something I only wiki-ed. :P

Thanks for reading!

[whomperjawed]

-weeps-

Oh, beautiful Jae wanting to take care of the ones he loves. I can see where Yunho is coming from.

I'm a little confused, though. When Hyejun handed the envelope to Yunho, he said "It was the only night you took X and got a little too intimate with Jae" -- was he talking to Yunho and that Yunho took X ??

Great storyline love! I adored it all the way through! <33

[helzfyah]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes you're right, Hyejun was talking to Yunho. And Yunho took the X, but it was just that once.

Thanks for reading! <3

[ranalore]

Fan. Tastic. Well-written, well-characterized, and beautifully understated. And I, for one, like that the ending is not entirely a resolution. It's messy and complicated and ambiguous, which is just right for the story you're telling. Excellent job.

[helzfyah]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the ending: it's really hit-or-miss, depending on a person's preference. But I felt it worked well without me having to dot all the i's or cross all the t's.

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[oldwillow_brook]

I just started reading this story and wow....Its just amazing. I cant describe how my heart just starting beating so hard when hyejun was in the hospital and how Jaejoong is still in love with him...It hurt but I'm glad you didn't resolve the problem...It seemed complete to me.

[helzfyah]

Oh, thank you for the fantastic comment! I'm glad you've enjoyed this story and that you see where I was going with the ending.

Thanks for reading!

[littletsuki]

hmmm..I'm not sure what I think of the ending....for hyejun that is. At least the jaeho is resolved. I enjoyed this twist in the So Much Mine universe; it gave more background to the characters. Hyejun is definitively the type of character that you have a love/hate relationship with. He's so understanding, but so sleazy. But I feel bad for him, and so that's why I think that the ending is a little unsatisfactory. But it works also......again, still kinda unsure as to what I think ^__^;

[helzfyah]

I know the ending can be a little hard to digest... but it's purposefully vague, and you can imagine an end for Hyejun as you like. Hyejun can go any way from here, and I don't want to choose his path. Hence the ambiguity.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, even though you're iffy on the ending :D