[Fic] Couldn't have known (for bel_chan)

Dec 22, 2006 18:48

Title: Couldn’t have known.

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: JaeHo, a dash of KangTeuk (Youngoon and Jungsu of Super Junior)

Rating: PG-13 - adult themes I guess.
Warnings: mpreg, angst coming out of every pore, and something I can’t say because it’s pivotal to the plot.

Summary: Yunho and Jaejoong try to cope, with the help of some close friends.
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jaeho, dbsk, suju, kangteuk, fic, fic: couldn't have known

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miramaru December 23 2006, 01:04:42 UTC
♥♥♥ That was wonderful. ^.^

I think this fic was very well-written, emotional but not too sloppy. YunJae is so much love. ♥ Not to mention Jae and YunHo. Maybe not right off but sometime in the future they can get another miracle. I hope so. ^^

I love mpreg fics, and I am happy I find more that more these days. Don't stop the urge if you feel like writing another one. ^.~

Very nice work, congrats.

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helzfyah December 23 2006, 01:25:00 UTC
Ah, glad you liked it. I tried to get the right balance of emotional going in this fic without everyone drowning in a sea of tears. And mpreg is a not-so-secret fetish of mine I've always wanted to tackle, so here it is.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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bellasurus December 23 2006, 01:19:15 UTC
*sniffs*

I've been shying away from miscarriage because...i don't know why either >_>;; but I did and I'm glad you didn't because this was beautiful. Jaejoong wasn't overly hormonal [*screams at jae!muse*] and Jungsu was just...*tears* Kangteuk OTP!

Yunjae is a sweet, sweet boy. Can i be his godma? XDDDDD

YAY for larger arcs!!! 8D mpreg fics have a way of eating up all your plot bunnies...

I'm honoured that you dedicated this to me, cos it's so pretty ^___^ Yours...is coming soon. I just worked out the plot yesterday XD. Full of crack.

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helzfyah December 23 2006, 01:30:23 UTC
I know what you mean - the miscarriage was hard to write, especially without sopping up the whole place, but the plot was stalking me. I needed to just get it down on paper.

And of course you can be Yunjae's godmama! He has so many godappas, we need to get some feminine influence in his life other than Auntie Heechul *crowns bel*.

I'm so so so glad you liked it! That makes me squee. And YAY for YunJaeKi crack!

<3

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kroongho December 23 2006, 06:02:47 UTC
“But Uncle Min knows everything!”
^That warmed my heart. ;_; It's a kid full of hope and everything that's good. ;(
And the thought of JungSu losing his own baby is killing me. T_T
Well-written fic. :DD
(I'm sorry I can't be more constructive in my comment, but I have a huge headache and well, I was never know for giving concrit, just spazzing. XD)

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helzfyah December 23 2006, 16:51:29 UTC
Oh - your comment was full of constructiveness! I hope your head feels better now, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story with all its sadness.

Thanks for reading!

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pynic December 23 2006, 06:35:06 UTC
love it!!! hope that they can get another miracle soon...

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helzfyah December 23 2006, 16:52:44 UTC
Oh, thanks for reading! I don't know about another miracle, but you might get a chance to read more about Yunjae from the beginnig. We'll see....

Glad you liked it!

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enchanted1312 December 23 2006, 11:18:04 UTC
gosh tat's so sad and it like reading a real story..
lols...really love it..
hope they will haf another miracle..
but they are cute just as they are...
hwaiting..great story!

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helzfyah December 23 2006, 16:54:16 UTC
I'm glad you liked it... I know, it is sad, but they have so much support that I'm sure they'll get through it. You might want to keep an eye out for Yunjae's story, but I wont make any concrete promises.

Thanks for reading!

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