[Fic] Pretend

[helzfyah]

Title: Pretend

Pairing: Jaechun

Rating: PG-13, for boy kissing.

Warnings: none, other than the boy kissing previously mentioned.

A/N: for

Comments

[thisistony]

SOFA

[thisistony]

Thank you Bri ;3 I needed some good JaeChun ;3 Unfortunately, my wonderfully good day was ruined a little while ago, so I will praise this more later.

[helzfyah]

What'd you do ? oO

And thank you ^_____^

[yumeyana]

“We can always pretend.”

Somehow, when Jae said that, it just hit me hard. Wonderful job. ^^

[helzfyah]

^_________^ Thank you!

[hyperion_quest]

First of all I'll be raiding your brain for witty comments. I don't know how you come up with them.

I see where you were going with the prompt though I get the feeling that you strayed off which I can understand since well, JaeChun ain't your pairing of choice. It comes out in how Yoochun is just kinda there, not doing much.

"Tracing music into the flesh of Jaejoong’s leg" WOW! Love that ♥! How does one trace music into flesh? I want a demo! lol

Even though Yoochun was kinda flat the interaction was still pretty good cause you rule interaction and you made Jae WORK!

And it goes without saying that this was a well written piece

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ Ja

[helzfyah]

My Yoochun either emos or gets high - this was kinda in the middle so he didnt work out too well. hmm - thank you for pointing that out.
(Jae is my strongest to write i think... i pay the most attention to him, so it's easier for me to write him out i guess. That's why i can write jaexanyone - Jae's my star and my muse^^)

And if you want the demo tape, you have to go ask Chunnie, lol. That was my favourite line to write^^

Thanks for your crit hun! YAY.