[Fanfic] Monster Mash 6

Dec 10, 2010 16:27

Title: Monster Mash 6

Characters: Francis, Arthur, Alfred, Ludwig and Feliciano

Rating: 15?

Warnings: Surprisingly sedate in this chapter, but still descriptions of violence.

Summary: Originally inspired by this. (Link to pic for those who don't have Pixiv here.) Due to popular demand, what was a oneshot has now spawned a fic.

Speedy update, go! )

fanfiction, monster series, hetalia

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tuulensisko December 10 2010, 17:06:02 UTC
You know, it's kinda hard to feel bad for them when they kill massive amounts of people in horrible ways.

... Though it's kinda cute how Alfred wants the werewolves as pets.

Btw, sorry for whining but when are you gonna update Family Ties? xD; Also, your French is kind of... all over the place.

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hellzabeth December 10 2010, 17:13:59 UTC
Pretty much. It's kind of like they're both as bad as each other.

Cute and facepalm-worthy. XD;;

P-probably when I get the inspiration for it again. I've rather literally lost the plot for it as well. orz;; A-ahh, a little help? I really can't speak French very well at all...

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tuulensisko December 10 2010, 17:19:53 UTC
D'aww. It's okay, I get how it is. *is horrible about finishing long fics* I'm just being a bother because I'm impatient. x) Though I love this AU too so it helps.

It's sourcils, not sourciles. And it's "mes chers sourcils" because it's plural and French likes all the related words in a sentence to match.

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hellzabeth December 10 2010, 17:22:30 UTC
Thanks! Edited it back to how it's meant to be. I- I get so nervous using French because I failed it in school on purpose, but Francis is always putting French words in conversations so...

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aislingthegreat December 10 2010, 19:35:11 UTC
I know I keep saying this, but Alfred is literally like a child. With a chainsaw.

Pff, poor Francis, hope Al doesn't kill him...it's not his fault! Although that might not matter...T_T

Feliciano, I love you XD. *hugs*

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hellzabeth December 10 2010, 23:53:59 UTC
Basically. I don't think he mentally developed past the age of 10. >>;; He's still at that "girls have cooties" stage.

It wouldn't matter to Alfred. Actually he might get pissed that Francis basically stole his kill. Whoops.

He's so cute and fail...

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aislingthegreat December 11 2010, 00:08:33 UTC
Yeah...that's probably not a good thing.

Oh dear...Francis is screwed, isn't he.D:D:D:

FELI~! *glomps*

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wisteria02 December 10 2010, 23:44:04 UTC
Yay! It's turning out to be a "Monster" of a fic! *shot for the lame pun* I love the hidden (hinted) twists in the story. This is turning out to be more than just a day-by-day life of a trio of monsters.

I wonder who would be cast as the Hunters? XD I can totally imagine Switzerland as one. *imagines guns with silver bullets* Or maybe even Russia?

I love how you keep Arthur in the classic vampire persona (hot/scary) type. (OO,)

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hellzabeth December 10 2010, 23:56:38 UTC
I've got the story planned out already, it's gonna be a little long (though not as long as some of the other stuff I've done... /stares at 95 chapter'd fic).

Boo, you guessed Switzerland. The Hunters are coming in later, you'll see.~

I like the original tales of how vampires were, not these Hollywood vampires you see in things like Twilight...

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wisteria02 December 11 2010, 00:08:11 UTC
Ahahaha!~ I'm not really a fan of Twilight. I'm one of those people who follow the saying "Don't knock it 'till you've tried it." So I've read a couple of books, seen a couple of Twilight movies, and it's just "meh, I've read/seen better."

I loved Anne Rice's Vampire Chronicles though, and my head canon for vampires are based on her books. And I sooooo loved that Vampire!Arthur is a badass monster, not a sparkly Gary Stue-ish mythical creature. Fantastic job!

I'm a stalker of your 95 chaptered fic btw. :3

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hellzabeth December 11 2010, 00:11:37 UTC
I've read all the books and seen the movies thus far, and to be perfectly honest? Meyer built an interesting world, and then buried it under terrible characters, repetative writing and an anticlimactic ending. Bitch where is my big vampire showdown.

I've not read Anne Rice's works, I'll be honest. Most of what I'm taking for Arthur is from the myths and legends I know myself.

S-sob why would you even. It's not even that good, just long... but thank you. <3

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aislingthegreat December 11 2010, 01:30:23 UTC
Psst...you might want to check the chapter numbers on the titles...they don't match up.:)

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hellzabeth December 11 2010, 01:32:38 UTC
L-lol that's what I get for copy-pasting from the last chapter. Thanks for pointing it out!

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aislingthegreat December 11 2010, 01:33:58 UTC
No problemo!:D

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hellzabeth December 11 2010, 16:51:56 UTC
Haha I'll be sure to keep updating then!

He is prettier than Leatherface. Most people are. He's also more friendly than Leatherface but that is why this is an AU XD;; I like developing these characters, I hope I can keep making it fun!

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