Comments | hellsprayer: Battle Grounds (Jared/Jensen, Jared/Chad, NC-17, Final Part)

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Battle Grounds (Jared/Jensen, Jared/Chad, NC-17, Final Part)

Mar 24, 2012 22:01

Title: Battle Grounds
Word Count: ~4,900
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jared/Jensen, Jared/Chad
Summary: There are some things you want. And things you want more. They both want Jared, and are willing to fight to prove it.

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au, jared/chad, rps, jared/jensen

Comments 19

grencatsmir March 25 2012, 03:47:05 UTC

Ah, so bitter sweet! I'm glad Jared and Jensen are happy together, but I feel really sick with emotion and sad for
Chad. I'm glad you included that whole scene with Jared and Jensen going on a date and how the sex was more
than sex, it bonded them. Sometimes it's good to read stories where not everyone gets what he wants. I do like
how Chad didn't like seeing Jared so unhappy and took the steps to fix it, even if it meant breaking his own heart.
Thanks for sharing!

hellsprayer March 25 2012, 13:57:25 UTC

Thank you so much for sticking with this story till the end!

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hellsprayer March 25 2012, 13:57:52 UTC

It's weird that a lot of people find it hard to love chad because I DO lol But thank you for reading!

calijirl5150 March 25 2012, 03:58:58 UTC

So glad you made Chad noble.

hellsprayer March 25 2012, 13:58:00 UTC

Thank you so much <3

firesign10 March 25 2012, 04:37:39 UTC

That was an intense little story!!! When Jared succumbed to Chad, I was so sad, as well as so bad for Jensen. Yay for Chad realizing the truth, and Jensen for being able to get past it. Well done, a tasty, angsty read! :-)

hellsprayer March 25 2012, 13:58:21 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts.

adameyezd March 25 2012, 09:36:35 UTC

I really enjoyed this story with the two guys both in love with Jared & each being so jealous & possessive (I had to laugh at Jensen's internal dialogue towards Chad when he first met him!).

But of course Jared & Jensen were just so perfect together & they ended up together (& just as it should be!).

You did a really great job with the hot sex scenes between J2...... how about the steamy shower scene with Chad! I would have enjoyed another 100 pages of the guys vying for Jared's attention, more jealous/possessive actions going on (ok, so I've obviously got a kink going on here!), & there's always room for more sex! But you did cover it all very well & I was a very happy puppy throughout!

Thank you for this story!

hellsprayer March 25 2012, 13:58:37 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you!