Oh dear, Spike is going to be in so much trouble when Buffy catches him.
Love how you write Dana's thoughts and throw in random observations like Her shirt is pink. It's not at all important to what's going on but it's something that pops into Dana's mind.
Like how Dana thinks of Spike as hers. Wonder what's going to happen when she sets eyes on him again, especially since his hands have been attached. I really hope she won’t try and chop them off again.
Excellent chapter. You've created such a strong voice for Dana - fractured yet completely lucid underneath.
She did know what she was doing. Why do they always say that? Hands have power. Hands can Do. She took his hands. Took away his power and made it Hers. Dana smiles. She doesn’t feel sorry for that.
LOL! So observant. Also loved They’re too old to be Bad. Your Dana voice is so much fun.
So we're finally headed for L.A. As if Buffy confronting Spike weren't enough conflict, it sounds like Dana could cause some trouble of her own.
Her thoughts are so contradictory, I can't even predict what she'll do. On the one hand, she's not sorry she cut off Spike's hands, and she still thinks of him as her killer, but on the other hand, she thinks of him as "hers" and wants him to touch her the way he touches Buffy in her memories. I'm sure that will end well... heh.
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Oh dear, Spike is going to be in so much trouble when Buffy catches him.
Love how you write Dana's thoughts and throw in random observations like Her shirt is pink. It's not at all important to what's going on but it's something that pops into Dana's mind.
Like how Dana thinks of Spike as hers. Wonder what's going to happen when she sets eyes on him again, especially since his hands have been attached. I really hope she won’t try and chop them off again.
Great update!
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Glad you liked the update. It's weirdly soothing to write in Dana's voice, let the stream-of-consciousness just... go!
*hugs*
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Dana's slayer memories plus her obvious obsessions will upset Buffy's reunion, I think.
Spike doesn't know what's in store for him when these two slayers come.
[Love Dana's delight when she runs]
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Poor Spike!
(Thank you. I have to inject some childish wonder into the crazy!)
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She did know what she was doing. Why do they always say that? Hands have power. Hands can Do. She took his hands. Took away his power and made it Hers. Dana smiles. She doesn’t feel sorry for that.
Fantastic writing. Looking forward to more.
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In a way it's freeing, that there was so little of her in the episode, I can almost make her up whole cloth.
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LOL! So observant. Also loved They’re too old to be Bad. Your Dana voice is so much fun.
So we're finally headed for L.A. As if Buffy confronting Spike weren't enough conflict, it sounds like Dana could cause some trouble of her own.
Her thoughts are so contradictory, I can't even predict what she'll do. On the one hand, she's not sorry she cut off Spike's hands, and she still thinks of him as her killer, but on the other hand, she thinks of him as "hers" and wants him to touch her the way he touches Buffy in her memories. I'm sure that will end well... heh.
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Suffice it to say, um, I haven't quite decided how the reunion is going to go, myself! Hopefully I will figure this out before writing it. ;)
Thank you as always for your thoughtful comment! (And what a cute Angel icon! hee!)
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