Slayer Memories part 3

May 20, 2008 12:14

Against all reason, I continue this fic. More Dana POV. Disturbing craziness!
Part One Here

Slayer Memories 3: about 1,500 words )

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speakr2customrs May 21 2008, 11:03:08 UTC
Good stuff!

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hello_spikey May 21 2008, 16:02:28 UTC
Thanks!

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petzipellepingo May 21 2008, 12:20:43 UTC
I think Buffy's being a little too optimistic about this road trip. Dana is, well Dana, and that means things aren't going to go as planned.

And both Angel (girl's name "snorfle") and Spike are going to be in big trouble.

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hello_spikey May 21 2008, 16:03:17 UTC
Yeaaaaah... feels like there's a conflict a-brewin'. And they're still serving up the crazy at Cafe Dana. ;)

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hunenka May 21 2008, 17:22:31 UTC
Cool how Dana thinks about Spike.

"Dana is handed her own ticket and passport. She gets to hold these things like a Normal Person and she sits in her own seat and isn’t tied to anything." - That sounds so sad and so true...

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hello_spikey May 21 2008, 18:38:33 UTC
Dana is tragic, isn't she? She hasn't really had any sort of independent life, having been institutionalized since she was young.

Thanks for your comments!

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berric May 23 2008, 13:22:19 UTC
i am so glad that your writing Dana. she is so wonderfully complex.
i so do love this

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hello_spikey May 23 2008, 15:19:03 UTC
Thank you! I hadn't seen her done much, so I'm enjoying this.
:D

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zanthinegirl July 19 2013, 18:11:23 UTC
I'm a sucker for an outsider POV, and Dana's here is fascinating. You really capture Buffy's character here though- I have no trouble thinking this is exactly what she'd do in these circumstances. But I also suspect that things... aren't going to go as planned. What an intriguing story! So glad rebcake posted that link!

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hello_spikey July 20 2013, 00:31:40 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you're still enjoying. This chapter sure is rough to me, on re-read. Buffy's a great character to write because she's a woman of action - when in doubt, send her off! :D

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