over the fence

Feb 26, 2011 13:54

taemin/minho; rom; pg-13; wc: ~2,197; a life-threatening journey through mud and carrots - all in the name of searching!
i'm entering this fic for shawol_haven  challenge 009! :D
prompt: "Events are only inevitable after they happen." -Eric Foner
i've never written fantasy!shinee before so i'm both excited and nervous in posting this. pretty much inspired by ( Read more... )

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blindteddy February 26 2011, 06:39:11 UTC
oh my god! this was─ beautiful. i LOVE fantasy stories and this was perfect perfect perfect. ♥
and i will continue with this comment later, because it's late and i need to sleep. lmao.

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heehe February 26 2011, 06:47:59 UTC
oh thank you!♥ i'm so glad you liked it. ;__; please sleep, dear.

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blindteddy February 26 2011, 17:26:41 UTC
kay! i'm back to continue with my comment and oh god─ you have my vote bb! because this fic was─ i don't even know how to explain it. it was just so perfect in so many ways.

this taemin looking for something and minho already there looking, probably, for the same thing. and when he said that he already found it i was like─ d'aw~ ♥ it was SO cute and all the scenarios─ i can't find which one was my favorite. probably the last one, with onew the captain. i was wondering if he was going to be part of this and! OH HELLO THERE CAPTAIN! oh~ i really really loved it ( ... )

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heehe February 26 2011, 23:34:10 UTC
oh thank you! \o/ ♥ kekeke, yes i've planned for them to find each other in such a way, and i'm glad that scene was cute. ^^ awww, i'll always need jinki in my fics (i always try to write him but i'm bad at his characterization so i don't usually write him). ^^ ah, you did, i'm glad you did! aww, thank you. ;^; goodness, i'm flattered you like kibum here, despite everything! sdjkghdskjg, oh thank you thank you for your compliment. ;^; don't worry i won't stop writing. keke. a mem! ♥ ohyespleasedoifyouwishhehe.

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justangel February 26 2011, 07:54:13 UTC
Fuckyeah you updated!! You have my vote regardless the fact that I haven't read the fic--which I'm gonna do as soon as I'm done with my pile of laundry (˘̩̩̩.˘̩ƪ)

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justangel February 26 2011, 08:14:12 UTC
Ok my REAL comment bot the story--or tale. I simply love it. In bold, underlined, glittery text, with the emphasize of one hundred million exclamation mark. I do feel that the word constraint somehow holds you back from the usual deeper exploration of your characters though, but I doesn't make the story any less gorgeous. It's simply breathtaking how, in the land of disaster and lost, Taemin and Minho could find what they were looking for when they found each other.
♥ ♥

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heehe February 26 2011, 08:20:24 UTC
oh youuu. ♥ please vote for the best fic alright. :) *still very, very touched, omg* ;^; take your time. and btw, i've sent you a friend request. we've been talking for so long and yet we aren't on each other's friend's list, it's pretty inconvenient, don't you think ( ... )

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justangel February 26 2011, 08:43:46 UTC
OH MY GOD!! 3.14!!! Pi!!! Full circle!!! And what's with the stopping moment; a journey that ends to where it begins. A cycle, a completion...love.
Baby, YOU . ARE . TRULLY . GENIOUS !!!! Oh god, I can't tell how much I love every bits of detail that you crafted into perfection!!! I love how you make me think, rethink, guess, and seek for the elements of verbal semiology, the meaning beyond the written word!!

*hugs* I wish you were my student. I wouldn't have to be as much as begging them to 'feel' instead of 'see' the text--what they read and watch.

And why, I'm flattered that you add me as a friend ;o; I will surely add you back once I'm getting a proper connection to access full site.

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heehe February 26 2011, 08:15:04 UTC
hi hi hi! ♥
omg i love your gifs idk where you get them from. ;___; they make my day! aww, thank you so much, i'm glad you like it kkk. ;^; wellwhatwouldjinkinamehisship? :p SEXY MINHO, DW! ♥

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chaeii February 26 2011, 15:35:20 UTC
omg OMG O M G
how are you real ;_________________; <3 <3 <3

I have read this thrice but tbh, I don't think I have grasp much(or any) of the symbolisms and meanings. but god this pretty and hilarious and just so ridiculously beautiful. You are amazing bb.
excuseijustwokeupfromanimpromptunapexcuse

I'm just going to attempt to tell you what I think are the parallels between falling in love and the events in your fic but you'll probably want to disown me anyway.

It took one exploration for Taemin to see that the fences travelled without end towards the horizon, tall and menacing with sharp jagged tips and angry grains.
What I perceive the speck of gold as is a dream, love in this case, and the fence are about uhm, stepping out I guess? Like of your comfort zone and you're telling people that to find love, to find your dream you need to do things you usually don't, you have to look for it sometimes, and it may require you to step out of your comfort zone.

a whizz collided into Kibum with a rugby tackleI see this as you saying that ( ... )

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heehe February 26 2011, 17:06:03 UTC
;___; ♥♥♥ I am real because you exist. keke. OMG WAYLT Y U READ IT THRICE. ;^; sakdgkjghjrkg, i'm just happy that you like it. sdjlghkrjwhgkg. *still nervous cause you like fantasy so much* I WILL NEVER DISOWN YOU, YOU ARE CRAYCRAY. UGH. YES, YES, YES, AND YES, YOU ARE AMAZING KKK, YOU ARE NOT DENSE. ♥ omg stop treating my fics like an exam and enjoy it (if it's even enjoyable). ;^; /clings slkjghrhkjrg ♥ i just hope that you like it kkkkkkkkkkk. kekeke. I LOVE YOU.

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chaeii February 26 2011, 17:59:44 UTC
I can't help it they have so much stuff for me to look out for and I want to find everythingggg ;_______; /or i feel i have let you down OTL
But i enjoyed it immensely, please don't doubt that.
I love you more <3

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betrayalzia February 26 2011, 19:26:05 UTC
oh, i love the story, and now i love it even more that i read the multiple meanings of everything. i had my own ideas about taemin's watch stopping, and now that i've read over some of the ones behind the making of it, i love the ideas even more! ahhh, this was great! I love how they all kind of save each other in a way, and that's inevitable in and of itself.

wonderful job! I'm definitely voting for this one!

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heehe February 26 2011, 23:39:11 UTC
awww, thank you, i'm glad that you liked it! (and you read the meaning post!) \o/ ♥ do share your ideas on the watch if you wish, literature enthusiasts all learn from hearing different perspectives. ^^ but i'm glad you like the ideas, heeee. yes i was playing on the word "inevitable" tbh, because it has a romance to it that i couldn't help but explore. (and yes they all depend on each other ^^) aw, thank you then! ♥

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