over the fence

Feb 26, 2011 13:54

taemin/minho; rom; pg-13; wc: ~2,197; a life-threatening journey through mud and carrots - all in the name of searching!
i'm entering this fic for shawol_haven  challenge 009! :D
prompt: "Events are only inevitable after they happen." -Eric Foner
i've never written fantasy!shinee before so i'm both excited and nervous in posting this. pretty much inspired by ( Read more... )

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chaeii February 26 2011, 15:35:20 UTC
omg OMG O M G
how are you real ;_________________; <3 <3 <3

I have read this thrice but tbh, I don't think I have grasp much(or any) of the symbolisms and meanings. but god this pretty and hilarious and just so ridiculously beautiful. You are amazing bb.
excuseijustwokeupfromanimpromptunapexcuse

I'm just going to attempt to tell you what I think are the parallels between falling in love and the events in your fic but you'll probably want to disown me anyway.

It took one exploration for Taemin to see that the fences travelled without end towards the horizon, tall and menacing with sharp jagged tips and angry grains.
What I perceive the speck of gold as is a dream, love in this case, and the fence are about uhm, stepping out I guess? Like of your comfort zone and you're telling people that to find love, to find your dream you need to do things you usually don't, you have to look for it sometimes, and it may require you to step out of your comfort zone.

a whizz collided into Kibum with a rugby tackle
I see this as you saying that sometimes, love comes to you unexpectedly. and even someone who claims that he wasn't searching for love, may find love crashing into them.

the only way they could both fit into a sunspot was their current arrangement; Taemin tucked tight into Minho’s arms, his knees pulled into his chest with Minho’s on either side of him
uhm, love gives you hope, gives you life.

and they probably are A LOT more like the july 14, 3pm, but I can't really grasp it. (this is how really dense I am!!!) and your friend already pointed out about 3.14 (pi) and that would probably be something i spot out like, three weeks later on my n-th repeat. OTL

But I am just going to say again that this was brilliant and amazing and I don't know how your brain works because it is perfection and repoingreiopnhit <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

/crawls away

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heehe February 26 2011, 17:06:03 UTC
;___; ♥♥♥ I am real because you exist. keke. OMG WAYLT Y U READ IT THRICE. ;^; sakdgkjghjrkg, i'm just happy that you like it. sdjlghkrjwhgkg. *still nervous cause you like fantasy so much* I WILL NEVER DISOWN YOU, YOU ARE CRAYCRAY. UGH. YES, YES, YES, AND YES, YOU ARE AMAZING KKK, YOU ARE NOT DENSE. ♥ omg stop treating my fics like an exam and enjoy it (if it's even enjoyable). ;^; /clings slkjghrhkjrg ♥ i just hope that you like it kkkkkkkkkkk. kekeke. I LOVE YOU.

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chaeii February 26 2011, 17:59:44 UTC
I can't help it they have so much stuff for me to look out for and I want to find everythingggg ;_______; /or i feel i have let you down OTL
But i enjoyed it immensely, please don't doubt that.
I love you more <3

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