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hectic1

First Contact- Chapter 2

Jul 22, 2009 20:54

Disclaimer: All characters in this fic belong to ABC/Shondaland. No profit intended.

Rating: PG-13.

Pairing: Addison/Erica

Summary: A re-envisioning of that night when Callie and Mark oh so rudely bailed on Addison and Erica.

Personal note: I always wished there had been more interaction between Addison and Erica on that godforsaken show, because in ( Read more... )

addica, grey's anatomy, fanfic

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147xd July 23 2009, 04:49:16 UTC

OMG!great chapter... I love adica fics XD, and you can keep the characters with theirs personalities, you need to update like now =) thanks for sharing

hectic1 July 23 2009, 15:44:56 UTC

But no hurry, huh? :)) I'm relieved to hear you liked it. I was biting my nails on this one. Thanks for reading and the kind words.

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hectic1 July 23 2009, 15:46:46 UTC

Kisses and Callie. Sounds like a party to me. ;))

Thank you, I'm happy to hear it.

little_ruby July 23 2009, 10:05:56 UTC

okay, I've waited really long for this story to update and it was really worth waiting for!!! *lol* god, that will be really fun w/ Callie there now :D

hectic1 July 23 2009, 15:49:13 UTC

I know! I just went and checked, it's been almost a month since I posted the first chapter. Sorry about the wait, but I have that other story cooking too and it's giving me an ulcer worrying about them both. I'm glad you hung in there and that you enjoyed it. Thanks.

mean_manic July 23 2009, 14:48:50 UTC

You are my master! :D
it's my favorite story here so far! :D
I really had a problem to imagine Addison with another woman and especially with Erica, but here... this is great.
The way you write both of them is really realistic. I'm glad that they don't have an easy start - mostly because of Erica or maybe Callie - but I think it'll just do some good!
Can't wait for another chapter!

hectic1 July 23 2009, 15:59:31 UTC

I AM your master, bow before me! ;p

Wow, thanks, I guess I'm doing something right then, huh?

See, I don't have any problem imagining Addison with another woman, especially Erica. Addison strikes me as the kind of woman who has always been comfortable with her sexuality, maybe a little too comfortable. So I think if she was attracted to another woman, she'd just go for it. Hm, I think in some opaque way I just kind of called her a whore. But I meant it in a good way. *cringe* Regardless, I'm pleased to know that I've made the attraction believable for you here. Maybe I'll convert you to being a full-fledged Addica lover before this is all over!

Thanks for the awesome feedback, I really appreciate it.

lakela July 23 2009, 15:12:45 UTC

*gasp* Kisses, Callies... amazing.

Damn it! I was so looking for something to criticize and argue with you about, but this was just perfect. (better luck next time, I guess. Don't relax though, hehe)
This was brilliant. It totally makes up for the long wait.

I love that Callie is both, what brings them together and what stands between them. Can't wait to see how this develops and what role will Cal have in it, now that she has shown up... =)

hectic1 July 23 2009, 16:21:27 UTC

*gasp* No fighting? How does this work? I'm confused and a little scared. :p ( ... )

lakela July 23 2009, 23:09:39 UTC

Nah, no fighting for now. I'm saving up for the REAL fight, when my girl comes into the picture ( ... )

hectic1 July 24 2009, 00:14:05 UTC

No doubt I'll get Callie all wrong. It's so hard for us Hahn fans to understand such cluelessness. Keep sharpening those knives, you'll need 'em ( ... )

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