Smoking - Chapter 30

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[bitter_light]

This might be my favorite chapter. I should've been doing tons of homework but I'm glad I didn't because you're a godess, really.

[oof_floof]

<3 why thank you. but i hope you got that homework done, missus. wouldnt want to be responsible for someone slacking off. ;)

[burtyrocks]

wow amazing breathtaking! its nearly over sniff! i'm going miss this! (i dont think any storys made me shout at the computer as much i dont think any will again)
xxxxx

[oof_floof]

lmao awww. i'm glad you like it. <3

[midget666]

GREAT chapter! Please do more soon!

[oof_floof]

<3 thanks. more will be up sometime soon.

[snowisgreat]

You just blow my mind every fucking time and I don't know what to say!
This was probably my favourite chapter so far, simply effin', all that anger and hurt and resentment and manipulation - it's almost tangible and I bloody love it! XD

And I'm very grateful to this chapter for having caused the birth of the entire fic, what would this place have been without it? :D

*deep sigh* and only two more to go...

[oof_floof]

<3

yes, only two more to go.

thanks hon. i'd give you more of a response but my brain is dead. <333

[mm_mm4]

Oh god, I do not have time to comment this properly, I don’t think any comment could do this justice. However, let it be known that this is the most glorious story ever to grace the Internet. Seriously this is amazing, as Nerakrose said, it could be published. I love the way that this has twisted around, it’s like Ville’s sins have come back to haunt him in the form of Linde. As if Linde was some kind of butterfly, or maybe moth would be more apt, that’s slowly developed a harsh, bitter cocoon, and it’s all Ville’s fault. I adore the repetition in Linde’s not so little soliloquy, for me it created such a sense of hostility and pain. Your writing’s like poetry, like a dramatic monologue in that Linde reveals far more than he meant to, pure poignancy in that while he may not mean to express it, he knows how he feels

[heavenlyxflames]

<3

i could type a proper reply but im swamped with work. thank you though, this really just. made my day. that you took the time out to put so much into your comment really makes me feel warm and fuzzy. thank you. *hugs*

i wont leave vam, but im not going to be doing anymore writing, i dont think. im pretty much over it now. but i'll stick around... i like being the moderator way too much. ;) and i think i owe the place the loyalty of sticking around. *nods*