Smoking - Chapter 18

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[blueandbrady]

Aww, I just feel so bad for Linde, then at times I feel that I shouldn't. At times I love Ville and at others I just wanna lock him in a room until he changes.
But I do love excited Ville and it's amusing that he resembles a 7 year old in maturity.
Anywho, very nice update.

[oof_floof]

out of curiousity, why do you feel you shouldn't be sorry for Linde?

Ville really does need to be locked up though. ahha. i dislike him great amounts in this. ;)

thank you, glad you liked it. more next year ;) (yah, thats low, but shh. it amuses me. heh.)

[blueandbrady]

I only feel that I sorta shouldn't be sorry at the times that he sorta says that he DOES like it. At least a little, that he doens't want to get out and enjoys Ville's time. But the times that I do feel sorry very much out weigh the times I don't.

Yeah, ass wipe. I bet anyone that beautiful COULD be like that, I can't say from any evidence, but Ville doesn't strike me as a natural ass. I get the vibe of manipulator since he prolly figured out how to use those looks, but not full out ass.

LOL. That is low, but true. As long as it amuses you babe. :)

[oof_floof]

ah, yeah, i know what you mean now. *nods*

yeah... i havent actually completely figured ville out yet. i mean, in this story. like. i know i write him. but. he does his own thing, generally, and i haven't totally figured out what makes him tick. manipulator is probably right, but i dont think he means to hurt people, not all the time. he just knows how to get what he wants, or something, and is somewhat blind to the consequences.

hahaha shhh. small things, small minds, yah? ;) <33

[elterriblefizzy]

I promised you I'd do better with comments. so here you go. I loved the interaction between Ville and his brother.

"pssh, you're not gonna be a rockstar,"

That's what they always say. Oh ye of little faith.

Snap.

<3333

[oof_floof]

:D i love comments haha. <3

haha lmao. tell me about it. Pfft @ Jesse for being one of minimal faith.

yay for comments, thanks babe. hope you actually got some sleep, crazy woman. and have a great new year.

<33

[elterriblefizzy]

7 a.m. to 2 p.m.

That's a good rest.

[oanja]

I'm so saving this story to my memories. I just love love love it!
I think my favourite part was when Linde realized that he'd had fun with Ville for the first time. That was so heartbreaking especially after reading the beginning. (I can't explain properly)
*runs away*

[oof_floof]

:D Im so glad you like it! hehe. *hugs*

Oh, no, believe me, i know what you mean about it being heartbreaking. I didn't even plan Linde to realize that but when he did, I just sort of sat there staring at the screen crying for him.

have a good new years, love! Have fun! <333

[oanja]

Have a great new years yourself!

(I'm just going to sit home and watch tv and surf the net. I have no life...)

[jalluvsrmz]

Great chapter! This story rocks!

[oof_floof]

Thanks. :)

[xshilox]

Guh, I love this story. More, more I tell you!

[oof_floof]

:D Glad to hear that. There will be more in a bit when I'm not feeling guilty for flooding flists anymore. ;)

have a good new year. Schöne Rutsch, as they say around here. Basically, have a good slide into the new year. ;)