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Smoking - Chapter 18

Dec 31, 2006 13:12

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such ( Read more... )

smoking, vam, story, fanfic

Comments 25

sjpheartshim December 31 2006, 21:01:13 UTC

That was... it was... wow. Damn, I'm not sure what to say after such an amazing chapter.
I love this story so much and the effort you put into writing it.
Poor Lily, I just want to hug him and kiss his blonde head.
Now, I demand you write more... please? I'll give you cookies.

oof_floof January 1 2007, 12:43:06 UTC

Thank youu. <3 I'm very glad you like it.

I like cookies, lots. More will be up soon. It's all written it just needs to be posted. Heh. And I like keeping people hanging. ;)

xmusicloverx January 1 2007, 01:27:14 UTC

sdhgfdsgbfsadhuvfdsfjshdfgfh GAH.

heidiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

hahah i dunno what to say.
'more' is prob. the right word;)

loves youuuuuu
happy 2007!

oof_floof January 1 2007, 12:43:34 UTC

happy 2007 babe. Love you haha. glad you like it. :D <3

ashleymoron January 1 2007, 05:54:48 UTC

This story makes me ache sometimes.

oof_floof January 1 2007, 12:43:57 UTC

sorry? heh.i hope its a good sort of ache.

ashleymoron January 1 2007, 14:51:38 UTC

Well...It's more of a heartbreak-y kind of ache. Which is good.

snowisgreat January 1 2007, 20:09:08 UTC

Fucking hell woman, you're killing me here! (In the good way of course :D) I'm so impatient right now, I really wanna know about that incident that happened after 8 years! But but, I'll take a deep breath and count to 10, then maybe my patience (hah!) will return to me *S*

I'm crazy about all the dilemmas and oppositions in Linde. On one hand he is now capable of saying no and talking to Ville in a tone of voice that he (Ville) won't take from others, on the other hand he's still like jelly and will do whatever Ville wishes of him. Apart from being fucked, and that was btw a good "detail", I might add. Detail in "-s, don't think I can call anything you put in your story just a detail :)

And the childish Ville - great. In this story he truly is acting like a spoiled brat who will be hell if he doesn't get things his way. But a brat with the cunning of a very wise man, he knows exactly how to make people dance to his tune (not sure this is how the expression goes in English so bear with me if it's wrong! :D)

slasher48 March 7 2008, 00:16:48 UTC

That was a well needed dose of humor in a story that's been far too serious for my taste.

Not that I don't love every bit of it, serious or not.

But seriously, from the twenty year old wrestling with the seven year old to "Wake up, sleepyhead, Ville wants to play" to "But, Mom"...I was in total hysterics.

You're absolutely fucking awesome.

Just thought you should know. ^^