Smoking - Chapter 14

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[snowisgreat]

I'm so glad you made it through the tunnel so you could bring us this :)

And do you really want me to keep saying it? To keep telling you how impressed I am with your writing? Okay, I will: I'm still very impressed with your writing and I wish a bit of it could rub off on me :D

And I know you've already earlier on described a lot about the relationship between Ville and Linde but I think it was really underlined in this chapter just how big a dilemma Linde finds himself in - to want Ville and yet being shitscared (pardon my English) of him, and it was easy for me to sense how torn he feels.
*Applauding you*

[sweet_666_777]

GAH!!!! I NEED more! You kill me with this story, and I love you for it. :D

[slasher48]

I'm starting to have a love/hate relationship with this incredible fic.

Mostly because reading it is an experience that I cherish, but also...

Every word I read makes me feel like I'm sincerely a boneheaded amateur and writing in the same context you do...is a futile pursuit.

*sigh* Not that I can stop reading, in any case. You've hooked me now.