Smoking - Chapter 14

[heavenlyxflames]

Title:: Smoking
Genre:: Drama
Fandom:: RPS Vam, Villinde, Dugera, Lindunn, others.
Rating:: R
Summary:: A story, reaching back to the beginning like a twisted, curling whisp of smoke from a slow burning fire.
Disclaimer::Most characters are property only of themselves; I own the storyline and the writing. This is a work of ficiton; treat it as such

Comments

[absinthe_memory]

I realy liked this story, YAY... more soon please :D

[oof_floof]

:D Im glad you like it. Normally I wouldn't be able to promise you this but there should be more soon. Christmas holidays start soon, so I'll be bored and wont have anything to do to make me forget to update. ;)

[bitter_light]

As I've said a million times before, damn, your characters are so real. I mean that in two ways. First, you present them as complete persons. Second, the way you are able to link the fictional persons to the real world.

I'm already waiting impatiently for the next chapter, as you can understand.

[oof_floof]

I'm glad you said that; it's exactly what I was trying to do, I'm glad to know that it worked.

*hugs* next chapter should be up sometime next week, this week if I ever get the chance to do anything but homework.

thanks for the comment, makes me lots happy. <3 <3

[xmusicloverx]

heeh. Valo is everyone's weakness. ♥

hahaha. amazing, as always :)
made me awwww a lot. and i needed it :D

(LLLL)

[oof_floof]

hahaha yes, i believe he is.

thanks love. glad to help. ;)

*hugs* love you <3 <3

[sjpheartshim]

This story is definitely one of the best here hands down. I love that you take your time to put depth in your story and develop your characters instead of it being flat and rushed. I love it.

[oof_floof]

Thank you. Really. Thank you. that's one of the best compliments one could give me. I really am the biggest un-fan of the shallowness of the stories around here, how rushed and flat they are, and im glad to know that i don't fall into the ranks of them. Thank you for reading, and for leaving me such nice comments. vam cookies are yours, if you want them. ;)

[nailsnoir777]

i really enjoy the plot development. no predictions to make... because i know there will be yet another twist...

[oof_floof]

:D best decision, not to make predictions. there are many, many twists and turns yet to come. Glad you're enjoying this. <3