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sparkism July 9 2010, 05:03:42 UTC
aaaah, I don't even know who to feel more sorry for, Holland or Spain. this was lovely, bb, the dynamic between the two was wonderfully written. ♥

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inquisitorial July 9 2010, 07:16:42 UTC
o-oh god Spain. I absolutely love that you write this side of Spain.

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qualapec July 9 2010, 09:50:10 UTC
*starts humming "Cultural Infidel"*

Spain smiles, a smile that does not reach that sadness in eyes. “Holland-I refuse to rule you if you are a heretic. So I’ll ask you again-are you?”

Spain can tell that Holland doesn’t quite understand, yet. But it’s alright, he will. He’s smart enough, Spain decides. Because his weary eyes blink open a bit wider and his chest heaves with dying laughter when he speaks again.

“Damn straight, I am.”

THAT LINE IS SO MADE OF WIN!

I really loved this. It was well-written, and your Netherlands is great. I also really loved your fusion of what happened historically with the fact that Spain personally cared for Holland. The whole concept of "not being able to rule over a heretic" was brilliantly done and twisted into something brilliant.

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disownmereturns July 9 2010, 13:37:37 UTC
Falling in love with all sides of Spain, and your Holland is awesome. This hits home ;3; /sniff It's beautiful~

Now I wonder how Fifa will turn out. 8'D /shot

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shuraiya July 9 2010, 14:58:13 UTC
This was perfect! Thanks for sharing. :)

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