Spain smiles, a smile that does not reach that sadness in eyes. “Holland-I refuse to rule you if you are a heretic. So I’ll ask you again-are you?”
Spain can tell that Holland doesn’t quite understand, yet. But it’s alright, he will. He’s smart enough, Spain decides. Because his weary eyes blink open a bit wider and his chest heaves with dying laughter when he speaks again.
“Damn straight, I am.”
THAT LINE IS SO MADE OF WIN!
I really loved this. It was well-written, and your Netherlands is great. I also really loved your fusion of what happened historically with the fact that Spain personally cared for Holland. The whole concept of "not being able to rule over a heretic" was brilliantly done and twisted into something brilliant.
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Spain smiles, a smile that does not reach that sadness in eyes. “Holland-I refuse to rule you if you are a heretic. So I’ll ask you again-are you?”
Spain can tell that Holland doesn’t quite understand, yet. But it’s alright, he will. He’s smart enough, Spain decides. Because his weary eyes blink open a bit wider and his chest heaves with dying laughter when he speaks again.
“Damn straight, I am.”
THAT LINE IS SO MADE OF WIN!
I really loved this. It was well-written, and your Netherlands is great. I also really loved your fusion of what happened historically with the fact that Spain personally cared for Holland. The whole concept of "not being able to rule over a heretic" was brilliantly done and twisted into something brilliant.
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Now I wonder how Fifa will turn out. 8'D /shot
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