❝why do i need anyone else when i can break the sky myself❞

Mar 08, 2010 22:02

break the sky | axis powers hetalia | 275 words | turkey ; greece | g |
in which successive earthquakes strike turkey and greece, bringing the two antagonistic nations closer together.
written for the hetalia_contest prompts “the sky is falling”, “bruises”, and “cultural exchange.”

“Just letting you know that if you need a kidney or something, I’m your guy.” )

✦fanfiction, ✖contest, ✶character: turkey, ✶character: greece, ❥pairing: greece/turkey, ✤fandom: hetalia

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qualapec March 9 2010, 14:34:55 UTC
This was lovely. And Sadiq's last line made me squee so much! XD It doesn't break with the rest of the story, but suggests some genuine caring between the two. You write them both wonderfully :)

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moirae March 10 2010, 06:49:24 UTC
Thanks so much, dear! &hearts

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sparkism March 9 2010, 16:30:33 UTC
aww, that was such a sweet ending. ♥ I love how you fit so much into such a small amount of writing. :3

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moirae March 10 2010, 06:49:44 UTC
i've been out of practice with drabbles, so i'm glad this one turned out well! thanks &hearts

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chromatic_coma March 9 2010, 22:48:19 UTC
Man, you and your timing. There was an earthquake in Turkey just this morning; 6-something on the Richter scale. ...but everyone above me has already mentioned it, haven't they? -_-

But you nailed the relations between them so amazing; god Hallie. If you envy my Egypt, I reserve the right to envy your Turkey and Greece. This is just insanely well written.

my entry pales in comparison! *sob8

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moirae March 10 2010, 06:50:18 UTC
Now that I've read your entry, I know that to be untrue.

Thank you! I'm glad you think I capture them well!

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chromatic_coma March 10 2010, 15:28:22 UTC
So true. But we're not in the same division anyways, so it hardly matters.

<33 Of course~

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icyfire4w5 March 25 2010, 16:19:10 UTC
Frankly speaking, I've been feeling blue today, and your fic has kinda restored my faith in fellow humans. :) Thanks for sharing this!

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ryuu_xi June 19 2010, 18:00:00 UTC
Oh, wow. Love this story so much.

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