Comments | heavenisonfire: ❝i should have forgotten you long ago, but you're in every song i know❞

moirae in heavenisonfire

❝i should have forgotten you long ago, but you're in every song i know❞

Feb 21, 2010 11:22

a brilliant dance | axis powers hetalia | 2000 words | turkey ; hungary ; taiwan ; china ; the phillipines ; spain ; france ; vietnam | pg |
in which france throws a dance party, and various outcomes result.
written for linguini's birthday.

( Because this year, France was in charge of entertainment. And after a number of his other suggestions were shot down vocally by the female nations, he had settled on dancing. )

✦fanfiction, ❥pairing: turkey/hungary, ✶character: taiwan, ✶character: france, ✶character: turkey, ❥pairing: spain/oc, ✖birthday, ✶character: hungary, ❥pairing: france/vietnam, ✶character: spain, ✶character: china, ✶character: vietnam, ❥pairing: china/taiwan, ✶character: oc, ✤fandom: hetalia

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moirae February 22 2010, 01:37:16 UTC

Thank you &hearts (China is a jerk /kicks)

IT'S NOT THAT I DON'T LIKE YOU I'M JUST TRYING TO PAR-TAY.

initials February 21 2010, 23:29:27 UTC

YOU.

YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU..

WOMAN. YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU.

moirae February 22 2010, 01:14:15 UTC

WHAT. ಠ_ಠ

initials February 22 2010, 20:36:47 UTC

You need to write more Spain/Philippines and Turkey/Hungary, baba. ;3;

Also, thank you for this burrito of goodness of all my otps. ;A;

And this: "When the music began in earnest, she kicked up her heels and he spun her around, and they began to move, faster, faster, faster, until it was as though she was the satellite and he was the sun, and her only purpose was to circle him."

Made me b'awww

akillarian February 22 2010, 00:11:23 UTC

Interesting fic. I was born in Vietnam so to see Vietnam portrait this way is interesting. I don't know what other word to use beside interesting. I like to see Vietnam pair with France rather than America and this fic has that pairing :D

moirae February 22 2010, 01:15:02 UTC

Haha, I totally prefer France/Vietnam to America/Vietnam. I've never really been fond of the latter.

akillarian February 22 2010, 07:00:17 UTC

I'm not fond with America/Vietnam too. I prefer to see France/Vietnam or Russia/Vietnam or China/Vietnam or even Cuba/Vietnam. I vaguely remember I was taught a poem talking about Cuba being Vietnam's Commie friend back in school okay ^.^ Although China will probably have a lot of potential to bully Vietnam in China/Vietnam paring.

chromatic_coma February 22 2010, 00:31:18 UTC

So sweet <3 You captured all these couples so well, with the styles of dance and music especially, and it was amazing. ♥♥

moirae February 22 2010, 01:37:28 UTC

Thanks, dear! &hearts

qualapec February 22 2010, 01:59:29 UTC

This was great! I love the way you write Sadiq. And I've decided there needs to be more Turkey/Hungary, it has all the love-hate potential of Hungary/Prussia but...I dunno, somehow CALMER.

In other news: China is such a JERK in this. I mean, it's not like the things they do have any REAL diplomatic influence...what's the harm in letting her come to a party? *cringe* I can't stand controlling men :(

moirae February 22 2010, 04:23:51 UTC

Thanks, dear &hearts Sadiq is definitely one of my favorite characters to write; he's just so open with his opinions, it's great.

I totally didn't intend it that way, but it ended up so. :|
I think I've been reading too much about Chinese-Taiwanese relationships this week...let's say this is set around 1975, then, when tensions were still pretty high.