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moirae in heavenisonfire

❝and all these memories come rushing like feral waves to your mind❞

Dec 30, 2009 23:52

Title: Moonshine
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: 1600~
Characters: Norway ; Sweden (Sweden/Norway, allusions to Denmark)
Rating: R
Warnings: sex // alcohol
Summary: Written for morningpay for the nordic5_xmas exchange. Written for the prompt: “Sweden/Norway - A lonely cold nigh, they bond while watching the snow fall, and end up on something like a one-night stand. ( Read more... )

✦fanfiction, ❥pairing: denmark/norway, ❥pairing: sweden/norway, ✶character: norway, ✶character: sweden, ✖request, ✤fandom: hetalia

Comments 7

qualapec December 31 2009, 09:10:06 UTC

This was really well written. As always, you convey the very complex feelings Norway has for Denmark. Also, I like your Sweden. Although he's kind of portrayed as a brute by most of fandom, you capture his gentleness.

Also, I like the way you write sex. It's very sophisticated in that you use a lot of really great euphemisms without any of them being giggle worthy. ^^; I'm sorry, that may not sound like a compliment...but one of the BIGGEST mistakes you see in smex, both online and published, is people coming up with silly "other words" to describe things. You make it work with eloquence and omission, which is actually quite a talent.

shinatty December 31 2009, 09:14:53 UTC

I don't know if I agree much with your characterization of Sweden, but I have to say I like the atmosphere in this. It's abstract in plenty of good ways and the complexity of their intimacy rolls with it nicely.

chromatic_coma December 31 2009, 23:27:55 UTC

Just as amazing as I knew it would be, this fic. You captured that loneliness they both are suffering so well, as well as the desperation they have. Brilliant.

aseies January 8 2010, 01:49:24 UTC

Aww. I was reluctant to click this 'cause I'm a Den/Nor shipper, but in the end I'm glad I did. I think you captured what might have happened emotionally very well. I liked how the sex really didn't have any feel in it but that's probably just my DenNor kicking in but I feel it was really well written. C': *thumbs up for a job well done*

pdung31 January 16 2010, 13:49:06 UTC

Hi :D, I am a Vietnamese. And fan of Hetalia, of course:">. Uhm, I want to say that... Could you please allow me to translate this fiction into Vietnamese:D. I really really love it and want to share it with others Vietnamese fans of Hetalia :D. I will be so glad if you agree :D. Thank you so much for this beautiful fiction^^, and I hope to hear from you soon^^.

moirae January 17 2010, 20:39:21 UTC

Oh, wow, that's quite the compliment. o///o

You're more than welcome to translate it, but I'd like to ask that you like back to the original when you post it, and maybe link me to your translation, as well? I'd be curious to see it. :)

pdung31 January 26 2010, 06:59:59 UTC

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thank you so much for your permission ^^

This is my translation : http://vnsharing.net/forum/showthread.php?t=134346

And of course I had liked back to the original ^^

I hope you like this Vietnamese version ^^