❝helplessness may be the word they nail to my name in a while❞

Dec 12, 2009 21:17

Title: Her Heart Got In The Way
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: ~1,300
Characters: Ukraine ; Canada (mentions of Russia and Belarus ; Canada/Ukraine)
Rating: PG
Warnings: kisses ; mentions of violence.
Summary: Written for chromatic_coma's birthday. Ukraine has a choice to make--to stay or to leave. Can Canada help her make the decision?

She knew she was making poor decisions, but she just couldn’t stop herself. Logic told her to do one thing, but her heart got in the way. )

✖birthday, ❥pairing: canada/ukraine, ✶character: ukraine, ✶character: canada, ✦fanfiction, ✤fandom: hetalia

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simplistic_star December 13 2009, 23:43:53 UTC
words of wisdom from Canada, wowww...

ahaha, the last line was sweet because she was just staying with Canada even though she knew she should be going to prepare. ^^; very nicely written. =)

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moirae December 14 2009, 01:16:58 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed &hearts

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violetzewriter December 15 2009, 02:24:35 UTC
N'aaaw, lovin' on this so much right now. You make Ukraine so strong, but at the same time she's still got the familiar sort-of-a-crybaby nature in canon, and Canada. So quiet and sweet through it all. Awesome. How on earth did I forget Chernobyl? Dangit! Err, that came out wrong.

I'm going to be super nit-picky (sorry), and say that Canada was the first Western nation to recognise Ukraine's independence. I believe the very first was Poland. Sorry.

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tiger_azul December 16 2009, 20:52:36 UTC
I loved this! You got Ukraine's indecision and conflicting emotions just right and I really liked how she drew succor from Canada's words of comfort.

Plus, I thought describing Canada as having "quiet strength" just summed him up so well.

Wonderful! ^_^

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