Comments | heavenisonfire: ❝i want to hate you, because you don't give me no conviction❞

moirae in heavenisonfire

❝i want to hate you, because you don't give me no conviction❞

Nov 04, 2009 21:26

Title: Vrede
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: -600
Characters: Denmark ; Sweden (allusions to Norway ; one-sided Denmark/Norway)
Rating: PG
Warnings: language
Summary: When Norway and Denmark's association under the Kalmar Union dissolves, Denmark finds he isn't the best at expressing any emotion except anger.

( “One by one, the beech trees fell.” )

✶character: denmark, ✦fanfiction, ❥pairing: denmark/norway, ✶character: sweden, ✤fandom: hetalia

Comments 15

chromatic_coma November 6 2009, 01:28:02 UTC

Poor Denny :(

This was so raw and heartbreaking, you did so good with such a small amount of space. I loved it ♥

moirae November 6 2009, 02:40:20 UTC

Thanks, dear. &hearts

chromatic_coma November 6 2009, 02:41:32 UTC

<33

trowicia November 6 2009, 01:47:35 UTC

Awww, Denmark! Man, I loved this. It's not often you see Denmark angst, and I think he seems the type to get really angry when he does get upset. You wrote him wonderfully! And Sweden's dialogue was great too. This is lovely!

moirae November 6 2009, 02:40:44 UTC

Thanks so much! :D

qualapec September 1 2010, 01:31:21 UTC

Thanks for linking this! I can't believe I haven't seen it before. It's just the kind of thing I'm looking for.

I see what you mean about the idea of his anger showing up first, but there are much more vulnerable emotions beneath it all.

<3 It's really great, btw

moirae September 1 2010, 01:51:22 UTC

It was the only example of Denmark angst that came to mind, tbh. I'm sure more is out there but I can't remember any that had him feeling the way we were talking about.

I like making everyone vulnerable on the inside, I think. It may be cliched, but I think it makes sense in most cases!

Thanks &hearts