❝i'm in love with a fairytale even though it hurts❞

Sep 30, 2009 20:32

Title: The Reddest Night
Series: Axis Powers Hetalia
Words: -1,000
Characters: Norway ; Denmark (one-sided Denmark/Norway, mentions of Sweden)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Kissing
Summary: Written for hetalia_contest's week 015 prompt, "Red." “Morning red gives wet days; evening red gives sweet days.” : the story of the Kalmar Union

“Yo, Norge! Still sulking up here?” )

✶character: denmark, ✦fanfiction, ❥pairing: denmark/norway, ✖contest, ✶character: norway, ✶character: sweden, ✤fandom: hetalia

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tanya_tsuki October 1 2009, 04:31:40 UTC
The prompt was red and you didn't write about communism. I'm very proud <3
/shot

Seriously, I like what you did with the prompt. Well written, as usual, great last line, and I learned something new. <3

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moirae October 1 2009, 04:37:03 UTC
You know, I was so tempted to write about China, and I had a whole story plotted out involving a piece of jade that gets stained with blood...it was melodramatic, to say the least. But I still may write it someday.

Thanks, dear! &hearts

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animaven October 1 2009, 10:03:04 UTC
One of the reasons i love Hetalia stories, is being able to read the historical notes and comments attached to these stories. History was not my main focus, but I find it so interesting now. All it takes is a good teacher. So thanks teach - and this was one good story, too. The red in the skies and the emotional content was very well done.

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harosketch October 1 2009, 12:37:02 UTC
I agree with Mindy, I did think you'd do communism. Well done :D

I love that saying, and how you intertwined it into the history of the Kalmar Union was superb... The kiss was written just right. I also learnt something new! Lovely piece my dear ♥

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chromatic_coma October 1 2009, 22:32:48 UTC
“I should have known this would be a wet day…red mornings always bring them…” So bittersweet, this entire fic. I love it, despite the unhappy ending.

I'm with Mindy, I totally expected a commie-fic from you. You sure showed us.

This really is such a beautiful take on the prompt, it's lovely <3

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midori_lover October 19 2009, 11:06:38 UTC
This is what I love about Hetalia fics, being able to learn something new while reading them. XD

Very well-written. Loved it. ♥

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