Sabriell Sparrow.

[araeph]

TITLE: Lost Bird Tale of Sabriell Sparrow Maybe this bird tale should stay lost.
CULPRIT: Seles Nowik

SUMMARY: Jack's daughter, Sabriell, never knew that she was a pirate until her path crossed with the notorious Jack Sparrow's. "I yearned for an adventure, an escape from my repetitive life that was slowly passing me by. My wish was granted, but

Comments

[vervainwolf]

"I'm fun size" is allowed by those websites she claims she's checking?

...Will not think about that, I need all the brain cells I can get.

[araeph]

Interestingly enough, you can see her almost trying to get period dialogue right. For example, this line:

I'm just a simpleton, a helper to a local blacksmith.

Five doubloons says this went through the Suethor's head:

"I want to say that my character leads a simple life. Now, what's an old-fashioned, complicated word for that? Hmmm, I know! Simpleton! Simpleton...yeah, that sounds old-timey! And who cares about looking up words in the dictionary anymore?" *begins typing*

Of course, since she did, indeed, say that her Sue was a simpleton, who are we to argue? I personally think that's the aptest description in the entire fic.

[lightbird777]

Sabriell, WTF?

Only a decrepit rating? This should be gangrenous based on the Sue's name alone.

[araeph]

I thought I'd give her some leeway, considering her "English as a second language" claim.

Though if anything could make me up the rating, it would be that author's note containing her explanation for her Mary Sue's name. Wow.

[darth_gojira]

This self insertion is like inserting a battleship in a bathtub