It's almost refreshing how practically everyone in this whole jumbalaya of a fic is just so respectful toward women. I love it.
And I liked that Adam was so blunt with Eli. I think that's important and not too many people do that which is why things like that happen. And papa bear David was so sweet. He's such a good dad.
Yeah, I mean, most of them were just raised that way (Chris and David were basically raised by their mothers who didn't put up with that kind of nonsense, Adam used to be kind of the typical dude, as he admits here, but Miri whipped him into shape, and then of course Eli being raised by both of them XD). Obviously there are some characters who aren't (like Eddie and Seth), and some who make honest mistakes from time to time but are apologetic when they realize they've done something wrong and learn quickly so they don't do it again (like Jackie
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David frowns when he gets home from work and sees Hannah curled on the couch in the living room, dressed in sweats and staring listlessly at the TV. "Did you do your homework?" he asks, his gaze flicking from her to the TV and back.
eyyyy timeline disorientation like whoa
"I was at my locker today, minding my own business, trying to get my stuff together for my next class after lunch, when out of nowhere this girl comes up to me and tells me I need to stay away from her boyfriend. I'd never seen her before today, I think she's a senior, and had no idea who her boyfriend was either, but I was just so confused, so I asked what she was talking about. And she just went off on me, told me again that I needed to stay away from her boyfriend, called me a - a slut, and then said I was too fat and ugly for any guy to want me anyway."
what the FUCK
"And now I just feel so gross, I mean, I am fat, like... look at me."
BABY NO
Hannah sighs. "Can we at least start getting healthier stuff, then? Less frozen, premade stuff?"
eyyyy timeline disorientation like whoa *dies* Sorry, there are some backstory ficlets mixed in with the arc-related ones. I thought this one was fitting in sort of the "dad" theme of last week, after David getting shot and Han and David having some daddy/daughter stuff.
what the FUCK Some girls, man.
and so it REALLY begins Indeed XD
attaboys. My boys :3 *directs you upward to all the stuff I told Nel*
And so the Hannah health conscious girl begins! I'm glad that David talked with her about this, and I'm also glad that Adam talked to Eli about that. Both conversations are extremely important.
Yeah, given the kind of people Hannah and Eli turn out to be, it's kind of easy to imagine their parents being really upfront and open with them about things, Adam for all the reasons I told Nel, and David because it's just him and Han and it's on him to make sure she's safe and healthy and happy, so he tries really hard to make sure he keeps up with what's going on with her (either by talking to her directly, or getting Jules to do it for him XD)
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And I liked that Adam was so blunt with Eli. I think that's important and not too many people do that which is why things like that happen. And papa bear David was so sweet. He's such a good dad.
Well done.
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"Did you do your homework?" he asks, his gaze flicking from her to the TV and back.
eyyyy timeline disorientation like whoa
"I was at my locker today, minding my own business, trying to get my stuff together for my next class after lunch, when out of nowhere this girl comes up to me and tells me I need to stay away from her boyfriend. I'd never seen her before today, I think she's a senior, and had no idea who her boyfriend was either, but I was just so confused, so I asked what she was talking about. And she just went off on me, told me again that I needed to stay away from her boyfriend, called me a - a slut, and then said I was too fat and ugly for any guy to want me anyway."
what the FUCK
"And now I just feel so gross, I mean, I am fat, like... look at me."
BABY NO
Hannah sighs. "Can we at least start getting healthier stuff, then? Less frozen, premade stuff?"
so it begins
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*dies* Sorry, there are some backstory ficlets mixed in with the arc-related ones. I thought this one was fitting in sort of the "dad" theme of last week, after David getting shot and Han and David having some daddy/daughter stuff.
what the FUCK
Some girls, man.
and so it REALLY begins
Indeed XD
attaboys.
My boys :3 *directs you upward to all the stuff I told Nel*
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