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SCC Fic: Four Untitled Drabbles

Apr 13, 2009 04:31

Title: Untitled
Author: aelysian
Rating: PG
Summary: Four untitled post-Born to Run drabbles.

( because the finale made my fingers itch )

fandom: the sarah connor chronicles, character - john connor, character - allison young, character - sarah connor

Comments 5

orchida April 13 2009, 10:47:07 UTC

These are all wonderful. I think that the last two are my favourites, your descriptions are lovely.

istne_pieklo April 13 2009, 14:34:25 UTC

These are so beautiful. My favourite are the second and the fourth, they carry such a brilliant melancholy feeling...

#4 xbriyeon April 13 2009, 14:49:45 UTC

OH MY GOD,

I love number 4 the most.. just aghhhh

She takes him under her wing, so to speak, this teenage girl, because she’s kind and soft and smiles for no reason. He likens her to the sun he doesn’t see much anymore until the first time they’re ambushed and she reminds him too much of someone else. Sometimes, not often, but enough to make it sting, he forgets to call her Allison and the feeling is nauseating.

*flails a bit*

*mems*
♥♥♥

alissabobissa April 13 2009, 17:52:17 UTC

All four are beautiful and pack quite a punch for something so short. I think the last one is my favorite, but the last line of the first one is perfect. Very nicely done! :)

sunny_serenity April 13 2009, 20:38:19 UTC