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Dec 18, 2007 04:46

Sight the King - chapter 19
Summary: After Yuugi wakes up at the scene of a crime with blood on his hands and a voice in his head, there's only one thing he can do: Run.

in which some situations are reversed )

!fic: sight the king

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killyoudead December 18 2007, 13:38:44 UTC
Hahaha, so many not good things going on.

And if you can get your dentist hooked on this, you win at life.

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killyoudead December 18 2007, 13:43:10 UTC
*laughs* Well, that depends on how old his children are. Prepubescent people should not be reading this.

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lavaliere December 18 2007, 13:38:27 UTC
:O Yuugi's been turned into Pharaoh!Yuugi? Whut? I hope he kicks Sasori's ass.

Yes, the chapter was short, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Perhaps that just means the next chapter will be up soon? ♥

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killyoudead December 18 2007, 13:40:34 UTC
Got it in one! And, erm, you'll see.

Most likely! Because now I don't hate what's going on. Sasori was just being really stubborn for this part, but after this? Oh. So fun.

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lavaliere December 18 2007, 14:27:10 UTC
Once, when I first started writing fanfiction (and was terrible at it), I wrote an AU where Yuugi was the Pharaoh and Atemu was the "captured slave;" a total reversal of the usual cliche (which is the only thing I was proud of about that fic: it was original). XD Pharaoh!Yuugi is smexy.

So, Sasori's just another plot bump on the way to get Yuugi and Yami to be closer? ♥ xD I hope that means more smut on the way~

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killyoudead December 18 2007, 19:04:26 UTC
Oh man, I remember the days when I was terrible at fanfiction. Those were dark, dark times. [Several words for you: Sailor Moon / Dragonriders of Pern crossover. UGH.] The only archive had that any of it crashed pretty much beyond recovery, so, um, yay?

And Pharaoh Yuugi *is* very sexy - though dark Yuugi will pretty much be going D= the entire time.

Mmm. With all the other stuff going on, I'm not sure if there's a place for more smut. It *would* be nice, though, just... hrrrrmmm. We'll see how it goes.

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dragonsdream December 18 2007, 16:42:34 UTC
I got hijacked into going grocery shopping after work with my evil family and had to wait hours to read this.

Ah, but of course it had to be Sasori. There is so much happening, that you forget certain people. And now I think I should have remembered him.

And poor Dark Yuugi all tied up and bleeding.. aaw. And Yuugi locked away in the puzzle and turning into the pharaoh.

Excellent chapter. Loved it muchly.

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killyoudead December 18 2007, 19:06:38 UTC
Heehee, well, grocery shopping is always good.

*laughs* Yep! This is why I was so surprised that everyone thought Kaiba - because to me, Sasori *is* the ridiculously obvious choice. Especially considering the malicious way he smiled at Yuugi at the end of the trial and Yuugi was pretty much going *worrisome foreboding!*

Mmm. It gets worse, of course. and Thank you!

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killyoudead December 18 2007, 21:24:13 UTC
^_^ well, at least I didn't distract you from studying for long?

Short because I was exhausted and didn't want to put in the effort to type up the following scene, even if it would fit better in this chapter than next. Oh well.

Pharaoh Yuugi makes me all kinds of giddy. And now that I'm back in the swing of it, the chapters will probably be flooding the world, yes.

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ofthisangel December 18 2007, 22:14:57 UTC
OKAY. AKFLS. WHAT.

...I'm trying not to flail here, but every time I try to review all the words just end up jumbled. Let's try again.

...WTF. In the good way of course, the Sasori twins' father was completely unexpected, but looking at your other replies and at the previous courtroom chapters... I can see how it was obvious. But then again, it wasn't too obvious so it's something that only you, as the evil author, would be able to cackle over while everyone else guesses 'Kaiba'. xDD

*flail* I love what happened with Yuugi! I love how he reacted even more (on both Dark Yuugi and Yuugi's part). DY was just so "OH GOD, there's nothing left!" and Yuugi was just lost, but at the same time he knew what was happening. It was a very convincing dreamlike scenario since sometimes we know what happening, but our bodies just keep moving anyway.

AKFLS. Okies. Flail-reflex winning out. SKG ♥♥♥

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killyoudead December 18 2007, 22:42:00 UTC
DAMN STRAIGHT.

Hahaha, I get that sometimes too.

Heh, yeah, I was really surprised no one suspected Tadashi, considering the few times he was mentioned played like this:
It was Sasori Tadashi that frightened Yuugi - the man was enraged, his carefully arranged appearance was in shambles. [...] It was not one of his trademark smiles sold to photographers, or one painfully etched onto his face. It was the most sincerely happy smile Yuugi had ever seen in his life. It was the scariest thing Yuugi had ever seen in his life. and Sasori Tadashi glared at Yuugi with fire and hatred and a sick sort of glee that Yuugi couldn’t identify but made him shiver internally all the same.*laughs* I wasn't expecting everyone to think Kaiba, so yes, there was much 'cackling' to be had. Unexpected plot twist! Haha ( ... )

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