Speechless (Jordan Staal/Sidney Crosby)

[heartandmindxx]

Title: Speechless
Author:heartandmindxx
Pairing: Jordan Staal/Sidney Crosby [Pittsburgh Penguins]
Rating: 14A
Summary: Jordan had always had a word for everything.
Notes: nefarious1729 and I had a thing where we decided to write different stories with the same prompt and the same pairing. This is mine. Hers is here!
Disclaimer: You know the deal. I don’t claim anything

Comments

[nefarious1729]

Yours is totally better than mine. I fucking love your beginning, it's amazing. And the whole, "You're retarded," Jordan says between breaths, "I..." He trails off as he realizes which word is on the tip of his tongue."

Amazing as always. You're the best. And I'm so protective of this pairing but you can take them out for a spin whenever you want.

[heartandmindxx]

I like yours WAY better, so don't argue. I... you. ♥ I know you love this pairing so I'm glad I did it justice in your eyes!

[heartandmindxx]

Thank you so much! =D

[sheesusnat]

...Ooh, I like this. I like this very much. I adore this pairing, and they're so underrated as a friendship, so it makes me happy to see someone write them. Awesome job, just great all the way around.

And I don't even like Malkin, but I liked the way you worked him in this one :)

[heartandmindxx]

Hahaha. Malkin's English entertains me so I had to throw him in there. I love this pairing too but I always feel like I don't have enough exposure to them to write them effectively. Thank you!

[aandp45]

You actually made me cry

[heartandmindxx]

*blush* I hope that's ok.

[callalily919]

This was such a WONDERFUL way to spend a study break! I'm so in love with the way Jordan realizes his feelings. Just amazing :)

[heartandmindxx]

Ah, thank you so much! Glad I kept you occupied. xo